Reviews for Twilight : The Gamer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() somehow turned into a kingdom hearts crossover fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() You skipped a good portion of the story there and just gave us a summary. |
![]() ![]() yes. great name. nightMAR moon. |
![]() ![]() Formatting is broken in numerous places, but good otherwise. Please continue this, There are too many fics with potential that have died... |
![]() ![]() ![]() the formatting (color, center, etc) on chapter 1 don't work, they just display the code which makes the text messy looking |
![]() ![]() I would love to see her die, wake up, and find that everything since she took the hit for Celestia, was a coma induced dream. However, I do really enjoy this story. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update this. Pls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Had to post this one here since I already posted for chapter 18. But I was wondering are you going to do a cheat that let's her use her different avatars in her main story line. Also I am looking forward to watching her use perception on pinkie pie once she gets to 100 or more on it since at that point she can understand it according to the chapter it was unlocked in and I am curious to how it will be explained. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story and has a decent plot. Ironically I think this is the only story in my favorite's list that has a rating below T but then again unless you actually go into a very good amount of detail in some of the other mentioned avatars like say if you do a chapter or two for 'Hellsing Twilight' with the amount of things that happen in it and Alucard if described in a bit of detail would instantly bump this to a T rating at least. Also if you wonder why Alucard is separately listed from the other things it's because he's Alucard. Still the sheer amount of realms that if you use and go into even a quarter of the full details you would have to bump this to a T rating. Anyway I really hope you continue with this and hopefully you get rid of that huge 'nerf' status effect you put on her when you started this one which I'm guessing unlike the other worlds since this is effectively the first official crossover arc this will be more than just a couple chapters or half of one. Course that's just a guess anyway hope you post the next chapter soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FF broke your formatting hard bro. You should probably fix it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Last chapter wasn't as good as others, but overall it's a good story There are two mistakes you made while writing this story 1) Twilight should have gained some stat points while on other worlds but didn't(especially on the one she spent 60 years. It took her 20 years at max to get where she is and not gaining any skill points for 60 years is a bit unrealistic) 2) Shouldn't playing the Genius Twilight raise her IQ stat? |