Reviews for Twilight : The Gamer
Spellflame chapter 18 . 6/12/2020
iwish328 chapter 18 . 4/22/2020
somehow turned into
a kingdom hearts crossover fic
dogbertcarroll chapter 7 . 6/27/2019
You skipped a good portion of the story there and just gave us a summary.
bushytailedeevee chapter 9 . 8/22/2017
yes. great name. nightMAR moon.
Mystikoa chapter 18 . 7/15/2017
Formatting is broken in numerous places, but good otherwise. Please continue this, There are too many fics with potential that have died...
mrttao chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
the formatting (color, center, etc) on chapter 1 don't work, they just display the code which makes the text messy looking
Pottere1 chapter 18 . 2/1/2016
I would love to see her die, wake up, and find that everything since she took the hit for Celestia, was a coma induced dream. However, I do really enjoy this story.
Darklen chapter 9 . 11/27/2015
egwolf65 chapter 18 . 10/7/2015
great story!
DJWhowhatwidit chapter 1 . 10/4/2015
Update this. Pls.
storyreader21 chapter 17 . 9/2/2015
Had to post this one here since I already posted for chapter 18. But I was wondering are you going to do a cheat that let's her use her different avatars in her main story line. Also I am looking forward to watching her use perception on pinkie pie once she gets to 100 or more on it since at that point she can understand it according to the chapter it was unlocked in and I am curious to how it will be explained.
storyreader21 chapter 18 . 9/2/2015
Great story can't wait for the next chapter.
CrimsonSylvan chapter 18 . 6/20/2015
This is a good story and has a decent plot. Ironically I think this is the only story in my favorite's list that has a rating below T but then again unless you actually go into a very good amount of detail in some of the other mentioned avatars like say if you do a chapter or two for 'Hellsing Twilight' with the amount of things that happen in it and Alucard if described in a bit of detail would instantly bump this to a T rating at least. Also if you wonder why Alucard is separately listed from the other things it's because he's Alucard. Still the sheer amount of realms that if you use and go into even a quarter of the full details you would have to bump this to a T rating. Anyway I really hope you continue with this and hopefully you get rid of that huge 'nerf' status effect you put on her when you started this one which I'm guessing unlike the other worlds since this is effectively the first official crossover arc this will be more than just a couple chapters or half of one. Course that's just a guess anyway hope you post the next chapter soon.
kewllewk chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
FF broke your formatting hard bro. You should probably fix it.
JesterDGrowlithe chapter 18 . 3/30/2015
Last chapter wasn't as good as others, but overall it's a good story

There are two mistakes you made while writing this story
1) Twilight should have gained some stat points while on other worlds but didn't(especially on the one she spent 60 years. It took her 20 years at max to get where she is and not gaining any skill points for 60 years is a bit unrealistic)

2) Shouldn't playing the Genius Twilight raise her IQ stat?
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