Glad that Ali knows the team considers her "family" and also like how she let them know that they each have a room at her home.

Glad that Ali went home and really liked how everyone at the hospital treated her with kindness. Cannot wait to see her reaction to the playset.

I'm really happy that Ali is going to recover and that she has no memory loss. She surely will be happy and surprised when she get home to see the "special project" that they are working on.

I love this story. please write more, I want to know what happens next

Nice save by the team and FBI. Glad Ali is alive and healing.

So relieved that they got to Allison in time before she was hurt further. Too bad that Plachinko did not get to suffer a lot before being shot.

Good work! Think you might like this ?

I like idea of Gibbs caring for Ali full time, I think that is what she needs.

this is just too too creepy for me...

you do know that Gatorade has TONS of sugar...

I love the time Ali spent with Tim and how excited she got about going to the museum and all the sights in DC.
Just what our girl needs.

Loved Abby taking Ali to bowling and Sister Mary Margaret showing her how to bowl. Looking forward to the gang getting together at her house.

You're writing style is really good and I like the way the story flows however the subject matter is not for me, I support your right to write whatever you want, I just find it a little to eccentric for my taste, for every one else enjoy.

Ali was so cute on that sugar high, all bouncy poor Gibbs having to tucker her out.
Glad she figured out the puzzle of the documents.

Nice to see Ali having a family that cares. Too bad Tony and Tim had to get their bottoms tanned.