Liked how everyone was so caring for little Ali

I just found this story and it certainly is different but I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the rest of this story.

I am in love with this story it is the bestest ever and I look forward to each and every update

You uploaded same chapter twice

Love it and it is fine the way it is. Also it doesn't need a M rating unless they start having sex which I dont think will happen.

She is so lucky.

my poor little Alli

Awww! The bonding time was sweet. That's our Tony. Too bad she got hurt while playing.

This could have been cute, but it has crossed into ridiculously creepy. I stop reading here.

I loved Gibbs in Papa Bear mode.

Please update soon love it

Shame on Tony for doing this. He needs to understand her better and realize that her relationship with her dad wasn't better than the relationship he had with his. We all know Tony has his own coping mechanisms. They may not be as extreme as Ali's, but he has some too. He had better watch out with Gibbs.

Well it doesn't look Tony is too happy about the trip. Gibbs is really being kind to her. Poor thing. You never know what one's background can do to a person or how they make it through as a coping mechanism.

Loved Ali decking Tony, he deserved it.

Tony wouldn't do that. And this is where I stop reading.