Definitely an interesting look at training - I can see Korrina wanting to do an outside-the-box thing like this, and it's always nice to try and get inside the Pokémon's heads as well. I can really get the feeling from this that Korrina and her team are all close to each other.

Honestly its so hard to find "normal" Lucario fanfictions let alone oneshots that are normal and deal witn every day things - er as far as the conext of the Pokemon universe goes. The writing was solid and a good look into the Pokemons heads when it came to reactions and actions. Overall a solid one shot.

Good work! I liked the character interaction a lot. The end was great.

So emotional and heartfelt on both the human and Pokemon end. And cute, even though I know it's supposed to be serious, but it's cute in a way. Well written, too. Great job!

A very interesting story, I loved it. Humans are able to command Pokemon because of the understanding humans, and that last part of this story is proof positive of that.

Why hasn't more people read this again? This is quite a deep and heart-tucking piece, and on top of it, tackles a viewpoint of original kind. Not many would touch, or really come up with a story tackling this sort of a thought.

You kept the story pretty vivid as well with the showing the consequences of this very story's subject and I really enjoyed the resolution. So sweet.

I'm going to need a heart transplant because mine just melted. Mental image of concerned Lucario is adorable. Most of the Pokémon fanfics I read are poorly written but you make it look effortless. Please don't stop writing fanfiction like this!

- *hugz* Inconceivable