Reviews for Strings of Fate
thel33chqUeeN chapter 10 . 1/11/2015
oh jeeze I wrote Blind Blown? I meant to say mind blown...GOSH am an idiot! anywayyyyyy, Just like to say I enjoy reading these stories.
guest 1 chapter 10 . 1/10/2015
Nice story, can't wait for part 2 :D
thel33chqUeeN chapter 10 . 1/9/2015
BLIND BLOWN! He was the kid the whole time! and excited to see more stories!
thel33chqUeeN chapter 9 . 1/5/2015
Dude, she REALLY needs to get to a hospital, bumping her head, nearly having a heart attack, and running till she can't anymore...WOW I think that the bad guys are not prepared for this. And is the main bad guy the robber who came in?
thel33chqUeeN chapter 8 . 1/3/2015
WOW! day I swear Jasmine is gonna die from blood force trauma from all that head bumping ._.
Continue, what's she gonna do next?
thel33chqUeeN chapter 7 . 12/30/2014
Why's Torch so Mean! :(
Anyway... Continue it's getting very interesting.
StripedSweater10 chapter 7 . 12/29/2014
OMG! Torch needs love from somebody, he's my second fav. character. P.S. cool chapter...
AmberDariano chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
Is there another section? Its really good I love how you write :-D
thel33chqUeeN chapter 6 . 12/22/2014
wow, I feel bad for both Blade and Torch...WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN! Is Jasmine gonna help them or something? Continue!...if you want...
StripedSweater10 chapter 6 . 12/21/2014
Ok...ok, that cleared stuff up for me...POOR TORCH! continue please, love your story
StripedSweater10 chapter 5 . 12/16/2014
I really have a question I wish will be cleared Torch gay? Is that why he doesn't like girls?
oh well whatever you make I still hope you continue
Username chapter 5 . 12/16/2014
What's gonna happen next? I'm so excited
thel33chqUeeN chapter 5 . 12/16/2014
OMG continue, and Torch is such a rebel XD
thel33chqUeeN chapter 4 . 11/27/2014
I love the steracle tippicle robber that comes inXD he should be the new main character or leading lady, trust me he could do an awesome job at being amazing
StripedSweater10 chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
cool story bro
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