Hello, I have been watching all the chapters of this story and I have to admit that I am loving everything and even more like the interaction Of the RWBY characters with those of Skyrim and the truth is I didn't expect the OC to have a relationship with Blake and I really like it, I want to see Adam's face when he discovers that they already changed him xd

PD: Please keep this story updated

Chapter length consistency, is a thing you know!

At least give a real full explanation for why MC and Serena don't want aura!

Aura for the MC!

I've always said, the single worst thing any author can possibly do in a crossover story... is to bring in additional characters or elements from the 'origin' side of the crossover to the 'destination' side. (The second-worse thing is to have characters in any number go back from the destination to the origin.)

Thus, in one interlude, you have turned this story from "pretty fun" to "unreadable."

I really enjoyed this story so far, I don't have muche else to say other than looking forward to more.

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Interesting but I have to question such massive restraint against murderous criminals, even when it is life or death.

I was pleasantly wrong and right, but mostly wrong. Cheers to that. Will thongs still proceed smoothly tho?

Oh why and why couldnt he look deeper into Emerald and her group. This happening on this eve feels so farfetched eoth their kind of skillset

So what what will he do? He has burned already for being complacent and indecisive quite recently, will he be reactive instead of proactive this time as well?

Just letting you know. You're using the word for Rifle.

Just realizing this story's been going for 10 years

That was great.

I hope you dont slowly increase Tristards strength and give him a power boost by giving him aura. Because why the hell would the Dragonborn need aura in the RWBY verse for power?! He freaking eats dragons and slays other beasts, far above rwby verse opponents. Yet we have seen him struggle instead of dealing with it calmly and fast.