Reviews for Chosen Successor
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 6/14
great xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 1 . 2/23
nice
XInsanityXGuiltechXShadowwindX chapter 1 . 1/15
You know, Canon would've been a LOT more fun if this were the case.
OriksGaming chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
Deleted Scene:

"He really did it," Homura said, shaking his head in disbelief. He stared across the village, taking note of the Hokage mansion, the Hokage monument, the academy, and every other building. "He painted the entire town orange."

"But . . . but . . ." Koharu seemed to be having trouble putting her thoughts to words. Finally, she managed to form a coherent sentence. "But he was just instated yesterday!"
Mischief Tea chapter 1 . 9/22/2016
Ooohhhhh I would reeeeeally love to see what would have happened if Naruto had been handed authority at this point in Konoha's history. I mean, obviously he'd halfway kill himself pulling the village back onto its feet (which he practically did anyway even though he WASN'T also acting-Hokage). But even more than that... imagine him and Danzo butting heads politically. Imagine Koharu and Homura having difficulty navigating those conversations. Imagine Kakashi and Sakura (and even Sai, in his own quiet way) freaking out at this much responsibility getting dumped on Naruto all at once and doing everything they can to try and "protect" him because he's too damn idealistic to notice right away when people are trying to manipulate him.

Imagine the whole village looking to him to be like the second Yellow Flash and him trying his damnedest to live up to it but just not having a fucking clue sometimes... Hoooo - lyyyy sh iii t.

I love it so much. Best divergence point ever.
ranoshi chapter 1 . 7/14/2016
This was brilliant I love the conversations you came up with, thank you for writing!
Edgar3t chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
Could totally see this happening
TNT T-LAS chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
Good story. It's good to read something different from the bunch once in a while.
Twinwolfsister chapter 1 . 5/6/2016
I don't often like one shots, but this story seemed to be worth a look dispite that fact. I'm glad I took the time, I added it to my c2.
jj chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
i like
erik chapter 1 . 3/27/2016
A great series of shorts.
Kiara.Queen.of.Kaos chapter 1 . 2/11/2016
Hahaha awesome
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 1 . 2/6/2016
Hehe.. good one. But dont daimyo's have very little power in the placement of the Hokage? I aleays thought that.. And i also thought that the daimyo died or ran away or something during pein invasion. Isnt he supposed to be a coward? Damn. Reading too many prejudiced fanfics...
Shinobi Gatana chapter 1 . 1/24/2016
I like this. I would have loved to see the story continued instead of a one shot, but it was well thought out and well presented. Good job.
Lil3597 chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
LOVE IT... Seriously. I love it. Can't wait for more stories like this one. You are truly great at writing humor.
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