Reviews for Chosen Successor
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 12/13
that was good keep the chapters coming
inspired-by-Dream chapter 1 . 11/8
a perfect way to retell the epic tale that is Uzumaki Naruto.

The daimiyo is someone to be admire though. And Danzo can go die painfully, like how he does his trainees.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17
OMG i would looove to see a continuation of this, imagine the kage summit hahahahha
MaaMaaI'llNeverTell chapter 1 . 8/31
I feel exceedingly, exponentially, and wholly happy, after reading this. Makes me want to scream "FUCK YEAH!" but I'm on a train so no.
AkaneShiro chapter 1 . 8/20
naw I wanted to know what would happen after that 3
Hoseki13 chapter 1 . 6/30
yoooooo! it would be funny if Naruto really became Hokage like that. i bet he would use all the tricks he learned to escape doing paperwork. and Kakashi, Sakura and Shikamaru would be half-dead and half-exasperated at this
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 6/14
great xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 1 . 2/23
XInsanityXGuiltechXShadowwindX chapter 1 . 1/15
You know, Canon would've been a LOT more fun if this were the case.
OriksGaming chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
Deleted Scene:

"He really did it," Homura said, shaking his head in disbelief. He stared across the village, taking note of the Hokage mansion, the Hokage monument, the academy, and every other building. "He painted the entire town orange."

"But . . . but . . ." Koharu seemed to be having trouble putting her thoughts to words. Finally, she managed to form a coherent sentence. "But he was just instated yesterday!"
Mischief Tea chapter 1 . 9/22/2016
Ooohhhhh I would reeeeeally love to see what would have happened if Naruto had been handed authority at this point in Konoha's history. I mean, obviously he'd halfway kill himself pulling the village back onto its feet (which he practically did anyway even though he WASN'T also acting-Hokage). But even more than that... imagine him and Danzo butting heads politically. Imagine Koharu and Homura having difficulty navigating those conversations. Imagine Kakashi and Sakura (and even Sai, in his own quiet way) freaking out at this much responsibility getting dumped on Naruto all at once and doing everything they can to try and "protect" him because he's too damn idealistic to notice right away when people are trying to manipulate him.

Imagine the whole village looking to him to be like the second Yellow Flash and him trying his damnedest to live up to it but just not having a fucking clue sometimes... Hoooo - lyyyy sh iii t.

I love it so much. Best divergence point ever.
bartlettpear chapter 1 . 7/14/2016
This was brilliant I love the conversations you came up with, thank you for writing!
Edgar3t chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
Could totally see this happening
TNT T-LAS chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
Good story. It's good to read something different from the bunch once in a while.
Twinwolfsister chapter 1 . 5/6/2016
I don't often like one shots, but this story seemed to be worth a look dispite that fact. I'm glad I took the time, I added it to my c2.
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