Reviews for The Long Road Home
cha chapter 3 . 9/5/2015
I love your story and i'll be waiting for the next chapter. thank's.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/27/2015
I like it. It's good but its lacking in the emotional depth such a situation would call for. For example, Mike is going through a helluva lot but there seems to be little to no reflection on that. IDK about anyone else, but i need a little more to be able to connect to him. I'm sorry if this is harsh but i wanted to give you some constructive criticism. However, on the flip side, i really believe Max would take on the role of his natural caregiver. It's just who she is, so well done in that regard.

Keep going.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7/2015
Oh! Please update. Did Mike die! I need to know! My baby!
Marjorie K. Place chapter 3 . 3/22/2015
Ah, a cliffy! Please update!
Marjorie K. Place chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
Very emotional start!
mnnie8778 chapter 3 . 3/6/2015
MOOOORE!
Gillian Deverone chapter 3 . 3/3/2015
Duh, duh, duh...

Love this story.
Gillian Deverone chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
Poor Mike. Great chapter.
bartagnans chapter 3 . 3/3/2015
I really enjoy how Max is caring for him despite their break-up and such. It seems like something she would do because we all know how she worries, especially about him. And oh my! What's wrong with Mike?! Nice chapter. Keep it up.
Lenika08 chapter 3 . 3/1/2015
ohhh continua pronto!
Kalyic chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
hey back to x-men fanfic...
Guest chapter 2 . 11/4/2014
It's amazing *makes goo goo eyes, claps hands and waits for more
bartagnans chapter 2 . 11/4/2014
Sweet start. I wonder what's up with Mike, besides the obvious. I'm intrigued as to where you'll take this.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/3/2014
Perfection! God I love these two and I love how you write them :) I hope Mikey is feeling better soon, even though I wouldn't mind Max playing doctor for awhile... :D
Lenika08 chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
me gusta como va
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