Reviews for What You Leave Behind
ReaderBot791 chapter 3 . 5/4/2019
huh
ReaderBot791 chapter 2 . 5/4/2019
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ishownotyourfacebutyourheartsdesire
Monkey D. Toushiro chapter 5 . 4/10/2019
im just glad the overwritten with fake memories thing wasn't a huge old twist that dragged on for ages!
thank god
Monkey D. Toushiro chapter 2 . 4/10/2019
excellent dialogue!
but im mad sirius didn't get harry out of the dursley's? or did his memories get overwritten with fake ones? what is going onnnn :0
the writing is very good though!
Slavish chapter 10 . 2/25/2019
By the way for everyone wanting a new chapter he reposted and changed some of this story over at the Dark Lord Potter forms and I'm pretty sure there is a chapter 11 there too. This all happened around September after I made my first comment on this story
ThreateningMedicine chapter 5 . 2/15/2019
Careful. Making the s in sie capital can change the meaning. Sie they. sie she.
CamTheThief chapter 11 . 1/24/2019
Well fuck... I am so sad this story is seemingly abandoned. Your characters are great, your magic is actually MAGICAL and the sense of adventure with doom ever on the horizon was absolutely enthralling.
I especially want to give credence to how your characaters interact in the day-to-day sense. A few teens shooting the shit, talking about their likes, dislikes; their families, their dreams, the girl they like or the sports they play. Every bit of dialogue felt so bloody natural in this story.

I will confess my disappointment that there is a pairing in the tags. Yes, given their interactions it’s not hard to imagine that Harry and Fleur might become romantically involved in the future. It just takes all wonder out of Harry’s various relationships and friendships when outcomes (no matter how far away) are already predetermined.

On the whole, brilliant story, mate. I’ll hold onto the vague hope that after three and half years you’ll decide to suddenly update. Cheers.
SeikoTuNeR chapter 11 . 1/19/2019
Darn it. I knew I shouldn't have sat on my computer for hours re-reading this. Really hope you somehow get the time to finish this. You set up so many great moments and left lotta threads dangling. Hope all is well, pal!
CMVreud chapter 4 . 1/4/2019
You've got tae be bloody shittin'me!
CMVreud chapter 3 . 1/4/2019
What in all...?
CMVreud chapter 2 . 1/4/2019
Well...
CMVreud chapter 1 . 1/4/2019
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Well, ye could have done away with the diary, but kept the rest. All in all an interesting start.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/28/2018
Why are all the best stories left unfinished :(
himalay.senapati chapter 9 . 12/25/2018
coooooool
himalay.senapati chapter 7 . 12/25/2018
cool story
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