Amazing story, very glad that i have stumbled across this

I can say, Your way of describing is amazing but the point you make of a nation is very very interesting,
I hope I’ll see it until the end.

I can say, You did a great job in doing the Characters way of acting and the story itself, I think even the word Good job wouldn’t give it much adoration as it deserve.

I have to say, this is very realistic, they way the characters act in general and the description is perfect, you did a very good job

If I can be honest, I had in mind the British Grenadier song too for the March, so yeah it is a good choice

This is the longest fanfic I've had the pleasure of following. I've been waiting since June for the next update, because it seems like we are at a major turning point that's been built up over a substantial time.
I know you have your hands full with other stories, but I wish you get the inspiration to get this titan of a fic moving towards the climax. I wish you luck in your writing among other things.

please update

plz update

This is an amazing story it shows so much into the human psyche and as you've stated, a nations issues. Keep up the great work!

Aaaaaand I’m crying

Lmao I stopped halfway through the chapter and didn’t come back for months so I was a little lost

Me decepcionas muchacho por lo menos le hubieras dado a shelle un entierro o la hubieras quemado como hacen los vikingos cuando mueren, pero no, se lo tenías que dar de comer a ese pulgoso de koro, no te das cuenta qué tanto shelle como mine valen por 100 de seryu,p esa pendeja no hacía falta salvarla

Épico pero mucho texto (osea a veces repetias lo mismo inecesariamente o hacías mucho énfasis en cosas muy obvias qué no lo necesitabasn :v igual buena historia