I will believe you when you say that he will not join night raid... Also you write some pretty good fight
scenes

The first chapter was pretty good but you said the same thing over and over so that really dropped it a level. Hopefully it gets better.

come you can make it to one million words

Honestly, at this pint in the story I can say that this is the best fan fiction I have ever read. And I've read quite a lot of fan fictions. The way you write is nearly perfect in my eyes. Except for maybe one or two words in each chapter, everything is perfect. The grammar is beautiful.

And the story is even better. The way you describe Tarsumi's feelings, his movements, and everything he does is great. As of now, you have made a fantastic relationship between Esdeath and Tatsumi. In every other Akame ga Kill fan fiction I have read, their relationship is either rushed, excels waaaaaay to slow, or their relationship is more like a mater and a slave.

I'm actually really surprised that I actually read every single word in the text. You can write tens of sentences to describe what someone meant, what they felt like when they said something, yet I can still read every explanation, because the way you write them are so thrilling and exciting.

I really do hope that the rest of the chapters are as good as these ones.

Thank you for writing such a great history!

- Jonas

Excellent work, keep it up!

Atill waiting for a lemon here.

I would like to first of all thank you for updating a new chapter. I like how the story is going so far you know with tatsumis purges, so thanks again and keep up the good work!

Its a honor to read your story.

You know? You're pretty good at this. And I like it. And I wish you luck with your life. I know how hard life could be. Take as long as you need, your life is more important then your hobby.

I know I've said this before but, keep this story going. I can also understand that you aren't a machine who cranks out long, heavily detailed chapters in a week or so and that you have real life things to attend to. But, anyways, keep this story going, can't wait for 1,000 reviews. Good luck with your new job by the way, hope it gets better.

To be frank, I love this story. I really do, it's a fantastic AGK story that brings on the grimdark that the series was trying to shovel at us. I sincerely hope that no inside purge happens to the Imperial Sabers, I really hope that none of them are just wiped out purely to create more hatred and angst for Tatsumi to suffer in. You certainly love to put in plenty of misery and pain, but then that is needed to show how corrupt and diseased this Empire is and that is in dire need of that Purge.

And, I never thought I was going to say this, but I am saddened that this is a Tatsumi/Esdeath story, since this would be the one PROPER story where Seryu is on the right side and on the path of redemption and true justice for the Empire. You've made a relationship between them that I had been searching for furiously a few months back, such a rare pairing which sadly won't be happening in this story since they would be PERFECT TOGETHER!

I am interested to see what the end fight will turn out to be, since the Esdeath you've written in is not one to simply change to Tatsumi's ideals because of love, she's made it clear that she wants to... Corrupt his light so she won't simply bend to him. I cannot wait to see how this plays out, especially if Tatsumi's little personal Teigu group becomes strong enough to take on Night Raid.

its nice to see that you are dead thank god you updated. this story is generally great and extremely detailed in the events and the character development which is rare in most cases i have found in fan fiction for this anime. i have Ben reading this story and i love it dearly and its nice to see that Seryu has guidance now in her quest fro justiceand finally seeing that the empire is not all rainbows and happiness now. good to read another good story for akame ga kill and i cant wait to see what next :)

Ok I normall don't care that much about typing mistakes but there is one that bugs me a little more than others. The part where the "Little" shit begging for her life she says: "I Don't wanna die! I wanna die sir, please...I don't wanna die!" I think somethings wrong here.

Other than that I freaking love this story even if its dark and I'm normally into fairy tail level light-hearted stories. This is an exception and I'm glad I found this story (But the chapters are SOO damn long man I can't remember the last time I read this much but this is as addictive as M&M's I just can't stop reading)

This story is F*CKING brilliant.(Please Confirm that at some point in the story Honest would be in torture chambers, chained and waiting for his nightmare by his so-called "Greatest weapon", Esdeath's hand while Tatsumi and Budo watching from a balcony sipping tea. With your level of detail in this story I believe he would get what he Truly deserve.)

Keep going. It's getting to the good part. Also very good, awesome story. Keep it up!

Nice chapter