I love your story. Your a good wirter.

great and unique story, I'm very glad to have read this.

you are a genius :D

well this has certanly grabed my attention i am curiuos to see where this goes

I adore your writing. The stories are always easy to read and flow. I was wondering if you were gonna update any of your older fanfics or if you were discontinuing them. If you will be continuing them, I hope you mange to update soon. Loved this chapter.

Couple spelling errors and a case or two of missed punctuation, but otherwise fine in that regard. "Wave further added as though a once in a lift time opportunity had been lost..." "Life", rather than "lift".

Never really a fan of speeches. Half the time I find they don't resonate with me as they do the characters that are on the receiving end (who often roar uproariously). Tatsumi's speech isn't much different. What really does it in though is the huge flow of text describing what's he's doing or how's emoting. I like PoV scenes, but pausing so often to hear about Tatsumi shrugging his shoulders or him looking cross takes me out the moment disrupts the momentum.

I liked Ren's PoV; it's a refreshing take.

Aannnddd the Doctor is out. Saddening. Why did he go on a solo mission? If not Tatsumi, his team would've been begging to tag-along if they found out he was going to put the hurt on Night Raid.

Should've saw it coming earlier, he was far too nice (and efficient) to be in the for the long-haul :'(

Seriously, if it weren't for the implication the good Doctor sweeps the lower-class off the streets and mercilessly experiments on them (perfection takes time and effort to try and achieve), I'd have thought he never had a bad side.

Nightraid had a habit of taking prisoners? They excluding Tatsumi from that declaration, or has all of Nightraid decided to kill him, damn the benefits of his capture?

Was disappointed at not getting to see how that fight when down, but in hindsight I can appreciate it. It was obvious how that battle was going to go, so why waste time when everyone already knows the outcome?

Surprised at the Storm God being able to Style all over the doc; I thought he used up two out of three of his limit breaks and the final one would kill him. While very strong on his own, didn’t it take all of Nightraid to put down Stylish? Seeing Susanoo doing it by his lonesome doesn’t feel right.

Would anyone in Tatsumi's shoes genuinely like politicians asking for his help? Yes, look hard and long enough, and you’re bound to find someone that will happily accept any help that’s offered, no matter its source – Assuming unlimited time, anything that can happen, will happen.

The anticipation leading towards Tatsumi’s grand plan remains dynamic. Hopefully it’s orchestrated sooner than later, as I’m eager to see curtain’s fall.

Until then.

Another awesome chapter! I always love the fact that you make the chapters long, as it makes events in the chapters more fleshed out, and you've done very well from the start. I appreciate the effort into all aspects of the story, especially character development. I also like that you introduced and in general wrote about Ran and Dr. Stylish. They both, as you said, not very fleshed out in canon. As Ran in his subtle ways (as in mainly observing and info gathering) and that Stylish (surprisingly) has a good heart in him. All in all, they help in the other's character development. One thing I kinda dislike while also liking is how vague the conversations, I like it mainly because it just makes me think and wonder what would happen in the future. I also noticed that this chapter is about Tatsumi and his actions yet it's mostly about the other characters as well. Looking forward to the next chapter! I hope the actual what Tatsumi is going to do will be exposed, as this chapter seems to just build up to it. (building hype as well!)

A stylish death for a Stylish man

Awesome chapter.
This chapter made my day better.

This story had so much potential... but now it’s focused on all the wrong details and reactions...

Infinity gauntlet? Nani? Haha I’m to lazy to log in

Ive re-read the story up to this point and I have to say, Tatsumi in this chapter is just a dick to his own allies and politicians who risk themselves in the hope tatsumi will do exactly what he just started doing. Just being a jerk for no reason at all. Now ill accept that he has had barely any sleep, just lost a teammate and been given 3 days to get things sorted out but after killing so many people in less than 24 hours, shouldn't he have calmed down at least by the point he gets summoned to the headquarters. IDK I got used to tatsumi being a debbie downer on himself but this attacking attitude towards potential political allies and powerful teammates just seems outta left field. I rarely ever leave comments but I actually really disliked the hostility being shown by a veteran leader acting like a rabid dog chomping at the bit to attack anyone. Also, Yumi is barely getting any screen time even though she was the first OC. She has so much potential to be molded with her back story that I feel its something we could focus more on. Last thing is the 4 beast or whatever that Honest has at his beck and call. What happened to those people? Will Honests son be making an appearance? I'm really invested in the story and just felt I should finally leave a review after basically reading the story twice up to chapter 42.

Ive re-read the story up to this point and I have to say, Tatsumi in this chapter is just a dick to his own allies and politicians who risk themselves in the hope tatsumi will do exactly what he just started doing. Just being a jerk for no reason at all. Now ill accept that he has had barely any sleep, just lost a teammate and been given 3 days to get things sorted out but after killing so many people in less than 24 hours, shouldn't he have calmed down at least by the point he gets summoned to the headquarters. IDK I got used to tatsumi being a debbie downer on himself but this attacking attitude towards potential political allies and powerful teammates just seems outta left field. I rarely ever leave comments but I actually really disliked the hostility being shown by a veteran leader acting like a rabid dog chomping at the bit to attack anyone. Also, Yumi is barely getting any screen time even though she was the first OC. She has so much potential to be molded with her back story that I feel its something we could focus more on. Last thing is the 4 beast or whatever that Honest has at his beck and call. What happened to those people? Will Honests son be making an appearance? I'm really invested in the story and just felt I should finally leave a review after basically reading the story twice up to chapter 42.

Hopefully Tatsumi gets a teigu

wow...
so... what happen next?