Reviews for Lone Traveler: Consequences and Omakes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Too much fun, a good continuation of what Arcturus did after the end of the story. This was a very good idea. I always wondered what would have happened if some of the older members of the Black Family had lived! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i will honestly say having just finished LTGW. I don't recognize what story this concludes. Though it's a great thing Harry did for them. i much prefer these afters to be included or perhaps noted so i can read them right after the story. |
![]() ![]() (It was totally Hermione.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's nice to see Dolores happy! I hope nothing changes that. |
![]() ![]() believing in GOD The Creator no matter the name(s) your culture gives he/she should not matter all most all religions believe in a head God at the top of many under Gods or only one God with many Saints below him/her. we are all children of GOD The Creator. |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you not going to finish this and other stories in the traveler universes? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for this extended look at how things ended up for this interaction. It was a very nice to see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. These "after he left" snippets are a lot of fun. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one chapter in particular needs to be distributed to the Right Wing Ultra conservatives in power in the US right now. It would probably give them a heart attack if they even manage to finish reading to the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait for brand new chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liked these, both in the main story and the consequences. I watched Hogan's Heroes as a child. Despite growing out of it I still have fond memories of certain scenes and character traits. This has been a nice nostalgic read of what might have been (although I kinda wish you had done more with Sergeant Schultz). And the closer was inspired. It was a surprisingly touching moment, one that I hadn't imagined or would have expected to be meaningful but was remarkably effective to tie the story, fanfic, consequences, and the Klink character up in a way that was unexpectedly deeply satisfying. (Okay, lots of 'surprise words' in that last paragraph, but I really was surprised by how much I seemed to care for the Klink character - it took that last line for me to see it.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the glimpses into what happened after the visit. :D |