Reviews for The Great Race of Mercy
kitty.0 chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
That was really sweet, even with the touches of sad.
Dixie Darlin chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
haha oh Jack, freezing the yeti's feet together? so rude XD and aww Togo just wants to play! poor baby's hurt though :(
somethingquitepeculiar chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
I really enjoyed the opening scene with the Yetis, their actions and mannerisms were so very THEM and I could see them tossing Jack around like that. Jack's little jabs seemed very in-character so far, too.

I gasped at the Muse mention and pointed at my screen excitedly and obviously no one around me knew what the hell I was doing, lol.

I am always here for Jack as a bookworm, nice choice in book. The library scene in general was amusing.

I really enjoy Jack having conversations with everyone, despite the fact that they can't hear him. It's a nice way to interpret how he might have dealt with the isolation and loneliness all these years.

Ahhh, Jack playing with Togo, Togo stealing Jack's staff, it was all too cute, I couldn't handle ittttt.

Anyway, good start, good chapter, looking forward to the rest!
RadicalCat chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
I enjoyed this. I'd really like to see where you take it.