Reviews for The Unbound Soul
rsroar1017 chapter 34 . 10/22/2022
Besides my last comment the story is great and it is great read. It is well written and thought out! Keep up with the great work!
rsroar1017 chapter 33 . 10/22/2022
Kind of werid and pedo for 15 year old to look at a 11 year old say something like that in a way that seem romantic that is disgusting
ErzaScarlett122 chapter 7 . 9/5/2022
The shade to Kojimaru haha XD he just wanted his extra cup of tea lol
APridefulSin chapter 42 . 7/14/2022
mwahahahahaha! the sword may show up in training... oooo...
Venus914 chapter 5 . 7/9/2022
Im on the side of authority. While im not naive to know that some leaders are puppets in reality, im just not comfortable with that in real life. Im OC and a perfectionist. I micromanage everything sadly. While i dont require to know about my subordinate's personal life, im very strict about their professional life. So the fact that as a Hokage, the leader of Konoha, not knowing what his subosdinate Kasai is up to, even when he is not doing anything wrong, rubs me wrong. I just cant get over that fact.
Kalvorax chapter 42 . 7/2/2022
if it wasn't for the nods to Harry, I would forget this was originally started with Harry.

I LOVE all the summons interactions :D
Amu4ever chapter 18 . 5/1/2022
Oh my gosh, you are soooo awesome!
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 4/22/2022
Wow, way to go about being thorough! Awesome!
badluck-ngprod chapter 42 . 3/2/2022
Very interesting story. One of the more unique ones I have read.
Subway chapter 7 . 2/1/2022
Kinda cringe with the random ass Japanese words.
Victoria Santos1 chapter 42 . 1/28/2022
Continue the story please!
adelalovesmadara chapter 17 . 1/14/2022
... why why why do you litter the fanfics with wrong/awkward Japanese when it's not warranted... I mean, chigau? CHIGAU?
adelalovesmadara chapter 1 . 1/14/2022
I wonder why would you even use Japanese though...
adelalovesmadara chapter 2 . 1/14/2022
'Wakatta' is not polite nor formal. You wouldn't use that to your superiors, let alone the Hokage. In this kind of situation, just 了解 (ryoukai) meaning understood/I understand is acceptable. 了解しました (ryoukai shimashita) is better.

Knowing Japanese while reading these kind of fanfics... really is a curse.
bamba12 chapter 2 . 9/30/2021
weeb speak never fails to improve a fanfic, you had to watch hundreds of anime to learn these 15 words and by god will you utilize them!
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