Reviews for The Unbound Soul
ErzaScarlett122 chapter 7 . 9/5
The shade to Kojimaru haha XD he just wanted his extra cup of tea lol
APridefulSin chapter 42 . 7/14
mwahahahahaha! the sword may show up in training... oooo...
Venus914 chapter 5 . 7/9
Im on the side of authority. While im not naive to know that some leaders are puppets in reality, im just not comfortable with that in real life. Im OC and a perfectionist. I micromanage everything sadly. While i dont require to know about my subordinate's personal life, im very strict about their professional life. So the fact that as a Hokage, the leader of Konoha, not knowing what his subosdinate Kasai is up to, even when he is not doing anything wrong, rubs me wrong. I just cant get over that fact.
Kalvorax chapter 42 . 7/2
if it wasn't for the nods to Harry, I would forget this was originally started with Harry.

I LOVE all the summons interactions :D
Amu4ever chapter 18 . 5/1
Oh my gosh, you are soooo awesome!
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 4/22
Wow, way to go about being thorough! Awesome!
badluck-ngprod chapter 42 . 3/2
Very interesting story. One of the more unique ones I have read.
Subway chapter 7 . 2/1
Kinda cringe with the random ass Japanese words.
Victoria Santos1 chapter 42 . 1/28
Continue the story please!
GreenTea4062 chapter 17 . 1/14
... why why why do you litter the fanfics with wrong/awkward Japanese when it's not warranted... I mean, chigau? CHIGAU?
GreenTea4062 chapter 1 . 1/14
I wonder why would you even use Japanese though...
GreenTea4062 chapter 2 . 1/14
'Wakatta' is not polite nor formal. You wouldn't use that to your superiors, let alone the Hokage. In this kind of situation, just 了解 (ryoukai) meaning understood/I understand is acceptable. 了解しました (ryoukai shimashita) is better.

Knowing Japanese while reading these kind of fanfics... really is a curse.
bamba12 chapter 2 . 9/30/2021
weeb speak never fails to improve a fanfic, you had to watch hundreds of anime to learn these 15 words and by god will you utilize them!
Ghost012 chapter 33 . 9/20/2021
my god this orochimaru trauma thing is getting so drawn out
Ghost012 chapter 27 . 9/20/2021
like seriously a slap on the wrist for messing up on such an important mission, regardless of how small it would set a bad precedent? and they are supposed to anbu
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