Reviews for The Unbound Soul |
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Elizabeth loines chapter 39 . 10/24 Checks and balances? Fuck is this? The us government? Lmao |
SunPho3n1x chapter 42 . 5/19 I really enjoyed reading this fic. I like how both boys were able to take comfort in each other and the bonds that they have made with other people and their summons. Thank you for writing this! |
LoweredUp chapter 42 . 4/15 On a less fan boy sense, this fic is actually incredibly well fleshed out, and i love the amount of care and detail that gets put into each and every characters mental and personality, even the OCs and the number lf changes made to canon really lead me to being super invested to what canon will look like, and i think youve done a marvelous job at putting together a coherent and well fleshed out story line and plot that an be built upon if you ever find the desire to continue to do so |
LoweredUp chapter 42 . 4/15 IM SO SAD THIS GKT DROPPED PLS PICK IT UP IF YOU EVER GET THE CHANCE LR DESIRE ITS SOOO GOOODDD |
Guest chapter 42 . 3/17 why don't you make a list of plot bunnies and a summery of what they are ,then finish one story to completion before going to another and completing that one and so on before you start a brand new story it would be easier then. |
wickedsomke chapter 42 . 10/5/2023 I really wish you would update your story's! I can't tell you how many times I've read and re-read this one and many others of your stories! your a very talented writer and I hope you keep writing! |
mostcommentsimakearebullshit chapter 34 . 10/22/2022 Besides my last comment the story is great and it is great read. It is well written and thought out! Keep up with the great work! |
mostcommentsimakearebullshit chapter 33 . 10/22/2022 Kind of werid and pedo for 15 year old to look at a 11 year old say something like that in a way that seem romantic that is disgusting |
ErzaScarlett122 chapter 7 . 9/5/2022 The shade to Kojimaru haha XD he just wanted his extra cup of tea lol |
APridefulSin chapter 42 . 7/14/2022 mwahahahahaha! the sword may show up in training... oooo... |
Venus914 chapter 5 . 7/9/2022 Im on the side of authority. While im not naive to know that some leaders are puppets in reality, im just not comfortable with that in real life. Im OC and a perfectionist. I micromanage everything sadly. While i dont require to know about my subordinate's personal life, im very strict about their professional life. So the fact that as a Hokage, the leader of Konoha, not knowing what his subosdinate Kasai is up to, even when he is not doing anything wrong, rubs me wrong. I just cant get over that fact. |
Kalvorax chapter 42 . 7/2/2022 if it wasn't for the nods to Harry, I would forget this was originally started with Harry. I LOVE all the summons interactions :D |
Amu4ever chapter 18 . 5/1/2022 Oh my gosh, you are soooo awesome! |
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 4/22/2022 Wow, way to go about being thorough! Awesome! |
badluck-ngprod chapter 42 . 3/2/2022 Very interesting story. One of the more unique ones I have read. |