I love this fic. This is great! I love it when you didn't include Magical World again because it will be disaster. I can't wait when Harry/Kojimaru meet Naruto, especially if they meet when the villagers abuse Naruto, hahaha! Did the Uchiha Massacre will happen? Because Danzo still alive... God, I want him died. Oh oh! And I can't wait for Kojimaru meet Itachi as team member (or not, it's up to you).

I love your writing style.
If you can't write slash but want to try pairing Harry with the males of Naruto (or whatever) why don't you try making Harry female. It might work for you.

I hope Fake!Harry lives a good life.

Prankster!Shikamaru is a beautiful idea. No one would ever suspect him!

This is very good! I thought I would be dissapointed by the beaver and the otter contract but you made it increasingly interesting and suitable! Luv ur ideas Author-san!

Addicted! Is such a awesome story, loved it on the first chapter !

I really enjoy reading The Unbound Soul. I'm only on chapter 14 but I'm already hooked. I like Harry Potter and Naruto Crossovers and there are very few out there that are decent and the ones that are are unfinished. The Unbound Soul isn't really a crossover but I still love the minor world building and smooth dialogue. While Kojimaru is more of an OC I still love him and all his little quirks (especially his obsession with tea). I'm a little put off by the gratuitous Japanese. While I prefer the use of Japanese Honorifics and certain untranslatable catchphrases (such as Narutos iconic Dattebayo) overuse of Japanese language that not everyone can understand is a bit...Weaboo-ish...No offense. I understand where your coming from as when I first began to study Japanese I enjoyed using it in every conversation with my family (I liked to show off my language skills) until my sister put a stop to it (she called me a weaboo every time I used Japanese). Apart from that I find there isn't really much I can critique in the story. The character development for Kojimaru is pretty solid and the character building you did for the obscure background characters was also pretty good. I particularly liked how you incorporated Ibiki Morinos backstory of being tortured. I can't wait to finish reading.

yay a rat died

Hope their bosses are much stronger than the beavers. Would love to see them on the level of the salamanders, toads, snakes, and slugs

hope he learns senjutsu and they are a major clan as strong as the bog four

Hope he gets over it

Hope he gets a major summoning contract

HAHA, I can see a pranking nara in the future!

hope he keeps getting stronger and comes up with some new techniqes

keep up thw great work