|Reviews for Harry Potter - Three to Backstep|
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/25
A great story so far. Think there's an error here in this chapter. Earlier when punishment of Ravenclaw was mentioned Flitwick said that all but two of the Ravenclaw team will be permanently removed from Quidditch for bullying Luna.
I expected Cho since being called out as one of those bullies to one not be on the team anymore and two not end up with Cedric after learning of her actions.
So I'm thinking either the author forgot about at the very least the Quidditch team getting the boot or its an AU change that she didn't bully Luna.
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/25
Soon going by what he said to the renderer he will be looking to kill the nesting mother just trying to protect her babies as is her instinct. Always hate that part of the stories. As well as the one dragon that in all but one story I recall where the tournament is written the dragon is made to stomp them.
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/25
Perfectly done chapter if he followed up on the showing of Riddle on the Pensive viewer with Fumbles blatant kiddy gauntlet and facing Voldy. So everyone there could outright experience the joke thats supposed to hold off a dark wizard that already broke in and out of Gringotts.
As well as Voldy being alive before Fudge can say any bs.
| KitchenDancer chapter 10 . 11/26
A bog problem i have with the how this is written is harry (who was abused as a child) is not given the same consideration as the gorls when it comes to permission and intimacy. Just as guys are expected to girls are also expected to gain permission and have a conversation about limits. That may end up being a short conversation but it still needs to take place. I would also like tp see them actually have to encounter difficulties not just easily succeed.
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/24
I don't agree with thats guests comment but I see where it came from. The story itself is fine. However Snape in this story is a blatant characature seemingly intentional and makes me wonder if the guest was a fan of Snape. Snapping back in annoyance and that fresh in their head when commenting.
Heck, both meetings with the headmaster were copy, paste immediate arrogant as your father memes giving de ja vu.
| the grey mage chapter 32 . 11/13
god damn i hate those angel characters so much.
| squidwardeats chapter 17 . 11/10
so on the word of one man harry doesn't even know he'll throw away his relationships with his bond mates?
| squidwardeats chapter 11 . 11/10
the lion, the witch, and the audacity of this bitch.
| the grey mage chapter 25 . 11/7
lol, you obviously like writing daph more than herms. i wonder how much shit people gave you when this first came out.
| jjslll54 chapter 9 . 11/7
“Good morning, Mr. Phelps. Your mission, should you decide to accept it, is to [insert ridiculously difficult mission here]. As always, should you or any member of your IM Force be caught or killed, the secretary will disavow any knowledge of your actions.
Love your instructions for Dobby's mission. Reminded me of the above from the 60's "Mission Impossible" show on TV. Am enjoying the story.
| jjslll54 chapter 7 . 11/7
Hello from Texas,
This is in response to your AN at the start of this chapter. Guest reviews are to be mostly ignored. They obviously haven't tried to write a story of their own so haven't a leg to stand on. I happen to think this story is one of the best on here. This is my third or fourth time reading it and have enjoyed it very much. I love the "Touched by and Angel" characters. My favorite was Roma Downey. You have done an excellent job. I wish mine were half as good. Isn't Ms. Rowling's sandbox fun to play in? 69 yr old white guy from Texas.
| wsbenge chapter 33 . 11/7
Reading this again. Dumbles gets a good stomp.
I enjoy the Angel crossover. Many of us in real life have heard stories of people who were not supposed to be dead yet being sent back by forced intervention. I suspect just as many who didn't die during some event also get an intervention ... and summarily die.
Both factors are likely in play. Destiny does play out. Within destiny, we have free will to choose. That proves to ourselves who we actually are. What will a person really do if they think no one is looking?
Life is difficult. Everyone dies. We learn while making our choices. Who ARE we? Good esoteric question. Find out after we are dead.
I will get off my soap box. I have had questions about life since I was six years old. Life does not appear to be random. Also crushingly important. To us.
| the grey mage chapter 15 . 11/1
good shit. saw the opportunity and ran with it
| the grey mage chapter 14 . 11/1
oh man. that was a great moment between harry and dumbles.
| NhaTrang chapter 16 . 11/1
Mm. I know this is long since been finished, but a couple things. First off, it's quite typical for women living together to start to sync their periods. (Having been married to TWO graduates from women's colleges, I've known this most of my life.)
With that ... you had an earlier AN complaining about a poor review. Here's another one. Your ongoing portrayal of Dumbles as a blind idiot who keeps on pushing and pushing his manipulations, snowjobs and domineering - no matter how many times the Trio bitchslap him - got tiresome before Ch. 15, and is just downright headshaking. People might get to the top of the political heap by being lucky, but they don't stay there without being *smart*.
I'll give it one more chapter, but eeeesh. (Also, I devoutly hope the Angels/Reapers stop showing up. This is turning into enough of a good-guys-win-every-round punching bag story without dei ex machina clearing the way.)