Reviews for Harry Potter - Three to Backstep |
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![]() ![]() Guest review or not I’ll still shit on a trash fic. This story so far is great, it was one of the first I read of this specific prompt. If someone is just flaming your work just to be an ass you can just ignore them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. Easy-peasy-dragon-squeezy. Thinking outside the box works pretty well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that, were this an actual, real situation, Harry would be sporting a stiffy any time the three of them were alone (and CERTAINLY alone-and-naked). Just "cuddling and drifting off to sleep" between two hot, naked girls would definitely not be the norm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Slow and steady wins the race. Eventually. Although Harry, being a fourteen-year-old boy, is being QUITE a bit more of a gentleman than one might expect. I guess he has a good handle on the cost-benefit equation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a fair cop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Snape was a bit more collected than I'd thought he'd be. Hermione's parents, though? We'll be able to hear the detonation from here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An auspicious beginning. This looks like it'll be fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god please dont make the Dah Dah thhing normal. I know its cuz theyre “speaking” but we are fucking reading it |
![]() ![]() ![]() and here i found another plot hole for you to close if you like. didnt the carrows get taken out in diagon alley? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi, i actually already read further than chapter 11, but im making my comment here because i wanted to constructively inform you that you refer to Myrtle as myrtle cummings in this chapter and another place after that i know of, then later changed her last name and gave Hermione's maternal family that name. i just thought i would let you know so you can fix it if you'd like to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mcgonnagal is a cat not dog. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simple just kill the azkaban DE'S. |
![]() ![]() ![]() if that review upset you, then you don't need to be writing published works. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I gotta say mate this was a cracker. An absolute banger of a fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He didn't attempt to obliviate them, he used leglimency on harry. |