I'm sure people have told you but incase they haven't someone is copying and pasting your story on Ao3 under a different name and selling them also

Well said I quite agree with you your story is your story to tell it is for us to read it or not we can and should make comment on it but it should not be in any way offensive to the writer when reviews are offensive to the writer it is what makes the writer stop and that is just stupid I have not read this story all the way yet in fact I have only gotten to chapter 7 and I have found nothing wrong are this tasteful about it I say keep up the good work and down with the flamers this is your story tell it your way thank you

I just read your comments re guest reviews at the start of this chapter. As long ass you do not include those reviews that offer constructive criticism in with the ones like you quoted I am fine with what you said. Unfortunately I have (rarely) run accross a fanfic so poorly writen as to be unreadable. Maybe I'm lazy but I do not review these, I just move on to something more to my liking. I am a retired English teacher an so my critical reviews will often mention such things as spelling or sentence structure or in extreme cases even vocab. You would be amazed at the authors who do not know the difference between "vial & vile" Thus far I am enjoying your work so please carry on.

I like this story, I really do, but seriously, the relationship between the 3 is really unhealthy. It's not a equal relationship between three, it's a relationship of 2 girls vs 1 guy, and they mostly gang on him, have their private conversations he's not privy of, make decisions without him. And Hermione even complain about him thinking alone about stuff, saying he should use them as sounding boards, when they don't hesitate to go do their stuff on the side, he's a real doormat here.

And now, they gaslight him saying he wanted that, when he clearly said he didn't care about the medal, but THEY insisted he should get it, and THEY contacted Gus for that even when he said it was not important. He should name one of them as proxy if they care about so much about the wizengamot.

Someone on ao3 ( AbrahamSmith ) plagiarized this and is trying to sell it so I had to come reread this one

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god this is still such a great read, i have come back multiple times to reread ut. always a good time

I have some questions.

1. Could you tell me please when Harry and the girls told their family and Sirius about coming from the future. I thought they told them of the soul bond and that was it, the angels came down and told the parents how important the soul bond was and why it couldn't be contested and to keep that a secret. I have skimmed back over the first couple of chapters and couldn't find it. I know they took a while to tell Sirius about him being free but I wouldn't think they would put that they were from the future in a letter.

2. Did Harry buy a new Nimbus 2000, I know his original was destroyed in his 3rd year by the Whomping Willow. I also know he owns part of the company now but he told the girls that he would keep his Firebolt but it was nice to have a stock in the company.

3. Didn't Harry and the girls decide to just call them soul containers? They didn't want others knowing the word Horcrux.

4. Doesn't others question more how Harry and the girls have so much information about current events and what is about to happen. I know that they can research but in the so many different areas they would have to research to get the knowledge there just wouldn't be enough time to do so. I know he usually brings up other things to distract people from digging too deep, but he has let forth so much knowledge that I can't see how people don't question more.

5. Seeming to make Hermione appear dumb. I know she has the blind sight when it comes to authority figures and that she lived the future so knows so much more about what is going on, but to keep having her reprimand Harry for not respecting Dumbledore when she knows so much of what he did to Harry just makes it appear as she is stupid. She was able to learn to accept Luna's gift, Daphne as another soul bond and all the stuff they did prior like the Weasley's potioning them but to keep over and over and over again reprimanding Harry for not being respectful to Dumbledore just makes it seem like she will never get it. And we all know she is the brightest witch of her generation. She figures so much stuff out of thin air and the researches, but to just keep blowing off what she knows and making Harry look in the wrong is really confusing to the story line.

Those are the only questions I can remember right now. It is quite a long story. I am enjoying it, but I am just confused as to that major part of telling family and friends

Thanks for all your hard work
From Momy2elmofriend2

Hey author, did you know there is someone web novel posting partial chapters every couple days and redirecting them to a different website to try to get them to purchase chapters?

Looking forward to it, but I don't see it happening any time soon. I will keep an eye out for you.

- Harry Potter (as he leaves he leaves the healer's office)

A good epilogue.
Better than certain others. :)

I don't know about other countries but, in the US, the lines laid to most homes have an extra pair of wires in them in case you want another phone number. Just hook it up at the boxes and no need to lay another line.

Now, of course, its mainly wireless.

Although we got fiber last year. Gigabit internet!

Small town.

Enjoyed it.

"Of course, Mister Potter... ladies... leave everything to us."

Harry's mistake.

"The first time I shot the shotgun I ended up falling on my ar...err... bum,"
lol
I did, too. Of course, I was six at the time. The tree I was shooting at was unfortunately still in one piece.
I learned not to play with Daddy's shotgun, though. Which was the lesson.

Harry should still remember to apparate. It might be useful.

"We'll have to get Ministerial approval to test that."
The Ministry will want to use it.

It may also work on the other two unforgivables. Perhaps adapt it to a personal shield.

turning this story into a fucking CHECKLIST they have to accomplish is just...bad writing. it feels so fuckin forced.