Reviews for If You Were Mine
SnowBus chapter 1 . 2/27/2021
Hey I really enjoyed reading this story! A part two where they meet in rice country would be amazing. I was also hoping for the "I love you" from naruto so bad haha. But overall, great characterization, nothing felt out of character and Sasuke's stubbornness and Naruto's longing was spot on. I'll be giving you a follow on ao3 as well!
Yukito Uchiha chapter 1 . 11/10/2020
This was so good. The emotions were very well done
frosty wonder ice chapter 1 . 10/3/2020
This is so well done! The longing in Naruto made my heart ache. Thank you for writing!
AmaraSalc chapter 1 . 3/7/2018
I am such a clumsy and new person in these stories of Fanfics. That seeing the few comments I assumed it was not so good. But for some reason something made me read it and I want to say that it is one of the best One-shot that I've read, and boy, since I discovered this, I've read too many. I want to congratulate you on this great story of truth. It's frustrating that the best ones do not have more chapters but without complaining it was the best and I really enjoyed it.
kunf'you'z-ed chapter 1 . 1/23/2018
I love this so much. I felt so much for Naruto and Sasuke, and how they are not able to be together the way they wish because they both have things they want to do that prevent it. And even though they both understand that, they both still want each other so much and I and just so glad that even if they might not be able to see each other very much, they will be able to finally be together in some form now. Thanx so much, bye!
unusannus chapter 1 . 1/11/2017
Sheepkun chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
-takes a deep breath- -screams- THIS FIC IS A GEM. -points aggressively- I always always come back to it. The story. Short, perfect, and satisfying. The characterization, so believable it hurts, help me. I, love this fic. You did a job!
sheep chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
OMG, SOOOOOOOOO GOOD OKAY. LIKE this is what I have been looking foooor. Your writing is fabulous gah
Jessirar chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
I like this a lot, it would be cool to make it a two shot and write about thier meeting in rice country. You're such a good author, causing me to actually want to review a story for once. Thumbs up for sure
AmberWarrior chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
SO CUTE. Thanks for writing it
Sukitte chapter 1 . 1/31/2015
Eu já tinha tropeçado com este OneShot algumas vezes mas sempre que o via pensava: "deve ter um final triste, quase trágico" (porque eles não ficam juntos no fim, daí a "tragédia"). " E enquanto o lia, sentia sempre apreensão acerca de como seria o final e posso dizer-te que foi... inesperado.

Consegui sentir tudo aquilo que o Naruto sentiu (o Sasuke não tanto porque como todos sabemos: ele é bastante reservado com relação ao que sente Dx) ao longo da história. Há uma certa angústia que não sei se é propositada ou se é do próprio Naruto/Sasuke. Mas sente-se e não é possível ignorá-la (eu tentei! -.-).

O caso é que fiquei bastante surpresa com as revelações do Naruto (de querer estar com ele, de o querer ter, de querer que o Sasuke o "obrigue" a prometer que o irá esperar). Há uma certa esperança neste final que no mangá / filme não existe. A sensação com que fiquei com que embora agora não possam ficar juntos, num futuro não muito longínquo assim será. Penso que o Naruto irá trabalhar a todo gas como Hokage para que Konoha volte ao caminho recto - tu entendes onde quero chegar.

Sinto que ele, como Hokage, vai esclarece aos aldeões ue o Kyuubi nunca teve intenção de atacar a aldeia, que foi manipulado e por isso não teve grande possibilidade de o evitar, o que realmente aconteceu aos Uchiha e que papel representou nisto tudo (e pelo caminho declará-lo - como tantos outros - um "herói anónimo da aldeia" e retirá-lo do livro Bingo, devolvendo-lhe assim publicamente o seu status como shinobi de Konoha), levar o Concelho perante a justiça (supostamente eles foram criados para aconselhar, não para tomar a decisão final. Essa cabe sempre ao Hokage, por isso se elege alguém para governar a aldeia. E os "juízes" serão os lideres dos clãs: porque neste caso foram os Uchiha, mas bem podiam ser os Hyuuga, os Nara, até os Yamanaka! E imagino que estas serão as bases que ele usará para os acusar formalmente. E criar um orfanato para aquelas crianças que ficaram orfas da guerra, leis que proíbam todo o tipo de maltrato e abandono de crianças. Enfim, mudar tudo o que está mal na aldeia. *Para mim isto seria o final perfeito. :( *

Enfim... Gostei da história e fiquei a saber que às vezes o nosso instinto engana-se! 8D
BFHwantsblood chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
this was an awesome read.
I think you should continue this, it is something different and I love it.
bridmatt chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
The concept of this is very interesting, primarily because it explores the idea of Naruto's shadow clones in a way that I've not seen done before. The clones are the ones having the affair, yet the actual bodies are experiencing it secondhand, through memories after the fact. So it's a very weird relationship: they are sex having sex, but not actually. It creates a bit of a philosophical conundrum.

By the way, since post-700 Naruto is canonically an asshole (I'm sorry, but he is), can you imagine him creating a bunch of clones and sending them off to have all the adventures he wishes he was having instead of being stuck at his computer all day? (That's my explanation for why he couldn't leave a few clones behind to play with his kids. They were already spread out too thin doing stuff Naruto finds more fun.) One clone goes adventuring, another hangs out with Gaara and Killer Bee, another spends quality time in the red light district, and of course another goes off to spend long walks in the forest with Sasuke. When Hinata finds out about it, how would he justify it? He's not ignoring his family/having affairs because it's not his real body that's doing it?
SkittleHeart and LadyAngel chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
LadyAngel - This fanfiction honestly cheered me up with the ending of Naruto. I think you kept them in character while exploring their bond...I secretly wanted them to be connected through the seals too! The sheer magnetism and intensity of this is incredible! You captured the sasunaru bond beautifully :D I love the way you engage with the issues these characters have and how you had these place unspoken boundaries in their relationship. Honestly, it was heartbreaking to know the words they should but couldn't say. The desperation from Naruto and willingness to accept anything was beautifully tragic while Sasuke's understanding and realism conflicted by his hopes and emotions bounced off this. Your charcterisation really was superb. If you weren't already, please, please do squeal!
Izzy chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
Well that was disgustingly brilliant wasn't it, I loved it from start to finish, couldn't even breathe in parts it was so intense! Such a great fic, good job! Thanks for the beautiful read!
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