Reviews for The Neko Saiyan v2
Ntraveler chapter 4 . 2/10/2016
Do continue this story please
1Billy-234 chapter 4 . 12/5/2015
i eagerly await your next installment of this story
James Birdsong chapter 4 . 7/14/2015
Nice four chapters. Please fix the typos in this story. And remove the curse words please.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/1/2015
This is a good story kip up the great work
Super Sonic Wind chapter 4 . 12/29/2014
Hey There! Great Story So Far! Here's Some Advice If You Can't Think Of The Turtle Hermit Martial Arts Style's Japanese Name Use The English Dub Version And If You Want An Earlier Than Canon Super Saiyan Goku And Super Saiyan Gohan Use The Idea During The Namek Saga Where Goku And Gohan Face The Ginyu Force And Have Them Break The Power Barrier When Krillen Or Another Main Character Gets Incapacitated By Recoome The Autism Struck Muscle Of The Most Gayest Fighting Force In The Dragon Ball Universe The Reason I Say That Is Because In The Anime DBZ He's The Idiot That Speaks As If He's Got A Serious Case Of Autism Because There Are People Who Would Label Such People As Stupid And The Poses Of Each Member Of The Ginyu Force Is So Gay That Funimation And The Dragon Ball Series Author Should Have Just Scrapped The Idea Behind Their Seperate Poses For Say Perhaps Superhero Poses From DC Comics.
They call me Bruce chapter 4 . 12/16/2014
Nice work here, fella.
Eldersprig chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
endeared sb endured
recreating Goku's training is boring ?, unimaginative?
Ryouga is *almost* more powerful than Ranma! In canon its pretty obvious that Ranma is better than Ryouga, and the only thing that gives him an edge is the body hardening techniques (being smashed by boulders) that Ku Long gives him. This version of Ranma, should overpower both Ryouga *and* Genma.

"young Sister", "youngest Daughter", "Young man" are not grammatically correct. You don't capitalize sister or daughter or young in this context. Just seems random.

Glad you are making it a Kasumi/Ranma fic. This version of Ranma, wouldn't have any patience for her.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 4 . 11/7/2014
Well nuts. Things are going to be AWESOME if he gets a Stage Three!
Death of Snipers chapter 4 . 11/7/2014
1 it was called the kamisenenryu if I recall correctly
2 you may want to consider getting beta for the grammar stuff
3 why does curseGED?
4 a good fight scene overall
5 uh, what's stage 1 if ranma's using stage 2? and doesn't he stll have the berzerker mode you mentioned?
shugokage chapter 3 . 10/30/2014
Definitely an interesting story good luck!
Sassy Ranma chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
What a stupid-ass idea.
Death of Snipers chapter 3 . 10/26/2014
ok, you may want a beta to help with sentence structure and redundancies, as well as to bounce Ideas off of.
other than that, not much new to add, just curious as to how you'll keep everyone fighting, especially with how characters got neglected in original DBZ
Death of Snipers chapter 2 . 10/26/2014
1 still a bit rushed
2 wouldn't that many more fighters make a pretty big difference?
Death of Snipers chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
1 ok, I was expecting something a bit different, but it's still an interesting premise
2 why just send ranma through all the goku training instead of giving him his own stuff?
3 A bit rushed, overall
4 if Ranma went through Goku-training, ryoga wouldn't be close.
5 Korin could still help train him with sparring, There just wouldn't be the same motivation.
Blackholelord chapter 3 . 10/26/2014
Well the crossover looks nice. Will be needed to be modified a bit to include Ranma, his gang and Nerima into the Earth of Dragon Ball Z, because I find it hard see the cannon Earth in this crossover. Nerima could be another city on this world, like Satan City. The Time Chamber is a rather good idea, because allowing it user to get years worth of training in mere days, but also there the gravity training bonus. Be similar to training on the planet of North Kai, except that a year training would be over in a day.
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