Reviews for Zap
Queen Bookworm the First chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
So cute! Sirius is adorable!
ellikanellika chapter 1 . 11/25/2015
This one really made my heart beat faster. Loved it.
UltraMushroomMan chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
I really enjoyed this. You never cease to impress.
Marie E. Brooke chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
I never thought I'd read Sirius x Lily fanfiction. I am a die-hard Jilly fan and wouldn't be CAUGHT doing that. But then I clicked on this, and it...it was awesome! XD
DobbyRocksSocks chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
I'm here to tell you that I hate how well you write a pairing you profess as your most hated. I'm disgusted.

Actually, I love this story. I like the playfulness of it, but also think you have them both (as far as we know about them at least) in character, and I love the snippet about Sirius's family life.

Brilliant job with this :)
TheSummerNightingale chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
I'm not even a fan of Sirius/Lily but as I was reading it, I kept on finding myself shipping them I'm still a hardcore Jily fan, but you wrote this extremely well, especially seeing as it's your NOTP! The whole "zap" was very cute too :)
HogwartsRocks chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
Woooow. More...please?
accioweasleys4 chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
Wow...this was really good! I loved the zap story. It was really creative! And I couldn't even tell that Sirius and Lily was your Notp. You wrote this really well! Good job! :)