|Reviews for Down In A Hole|
| StormyMonday chapter 1 . 2/8/2003
I know I don't give you many reviews, but I really, *really* love your fics, and this one is no exception. And I'm happy to know you found a home for your NC-17s.
Also, I'd just like to say that "Someone" could use a good tongue lashing. If by chance you should come across the person's email address, I'd be happy to be of service. *EG* At any rate, keep up the fabulous work. _
| Tarahumara chapter 1 . 1/14/2003
You little bitch! Grow up you little piece of shit! You do know what you are doing is ilegal right? And WE, the authors, can report you. keeps your ISP and we can report this to them and they will report this to your ISP and they will cancel your internet, my child. Mommy and daddy won't be too happy when the know that their little brat had their ISP account cancelled. Don't get your fucking panties in a twist, child, you know you're not old enough to be reading this stuff and you're a Hilde hater!
| kmf chapter 1 . 12/21/2002
This is a wonderfully written story - I could feel Duo's emotions so clearly right from the beginning when he started having what felt to me like a panic attack. No-one could go through the experiences that Duo has had without them impacting in someway, he is lucky to have Hilde so supportive and loving. I was a little frightened three quaters the way in when I thought he would actually give into the urge and let the vertigo take over; now that would be angsty for Hilde waking up to find her lover had jumped.
Beautifully written, you are a very talented writer
| LadyDi chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
As people have been both reviewing and defending your stories, I also would like to do so. This is yet another great story you've written. You do angst very well. XD
I know your pain Lara, because I used to put all my stuff up here, and you even read some of it. That is no longer possible because of people like the coward 'Someone', who hyprocrite everything they read because they are taught it is 'wrong', turn a once free webpage into a biased community. It makes me sick and sad because there is no more bill of rights anymore...not as long as it offends others. So those of us who try our hardest to make a truly GREAT fic FOR the readers are condemned to making our own webpages to keep creativity alive...which I was forced to do as well. If people want to keep their 'innocent' children from looking/reading upon/about something that is basic instinct, then don't EVER EVER EVER EVER, etc, let them turn on the _TV_! MTV is worse than ANY story any of us authors can ever write, and the programming only gets worse. Yet it is something all kids watch on a daily basis.
I could go on, but you get my point. Biased people need to have their minds extended to the real world and leave us poor open-minded people ALONE!
| Dragonfire chapter 1 . 11/26/2002
LOVE IT! Nice imagery and unique insight. Very nicely written
| mama-sama chapter 1 . 11/26/2002
seems to me this girl is just out causing trouble... and be sure you let me know where you go with your fics! i love them all you are one of the best writers i know! and yeah, saba's site is the best!
| Aphrodite chapter 1 . 11/25/2002
Lara, I apologize a lot for not reading your stories for quite a long time but I had way too much work on my hands. I hope you know what a talented author you are, Poor Duo why do you tend to torture him so much but with this story you have proved once again how talented and how great of author you are. From now on I wow to read and review your work. When I read about criticim for your work I was quite upset because you have no idea how much i admire your work. Your stories are completely mind-blowing. To the rude reviewer I might not be a writer but I am loyal and MATURE reader. If you are an author please have the balls to leave your name if you think you can make such atrocious comments. It is the fault of your dumbass that you proceed to read stories which you simply don't have the brains to comprehend. It is basically the fault of irresponsible readers like you who proceed to avoid the fair warnings given to you by authors and still read it and then run to the parents complaining about with your pathetic whining. You are the one who break the rules when you force your moronic mind to read fics that have way mature themes then you can understand. So please stop calling real hardworking authors baby and grow up. Ratting out seems so mature and hunting down other authors truly show how pathetic and sick you really are. Lara neverthless as a loyal fan of yours I am looking forward to see where you post your stories. The most appropriate website seems to me is Sabacat's wonderful ADDICTION. Do whatever you want but know this I love all of your stories and I really do admire your writings Keep up the good work and don't heed idiots with no guts.
| Bumblebee-Queen chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
This is excellent, as per usual. You're definitely one of my top authors of all time. You have a very lyrical writing style, it flows nicely. And it's intense. Great job! Those who criticize your fabulous work are probably just insanely jealous (_) Either that, or they have feelings of inadequacy pertaining to their genitals and the fact that they still live in their mother's baserment even tho they're in their 30's. :D Keep up the great work!
| animeangel195 chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
Pretty big words for someone that has chosen not to reveal his/her identity. The thing is, I like this story and I admire LaraWinner and her writing abilities. Her stories are full of imagination, life and passion. What gripes me are readers who think they are actually proving a point when they have the ability not to read the stories in the first place. Authors have the right to use their own artistic license in order to make their stories more enhancing to their readers. I am sorry that you do not like her work, but who are you to judge? Regardless, great story Lara.
| LaraWinner chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
Calling me a baby is very mature.
I removed the stories because you are right, it is now against rules and it shouldn't be posted. But it's closed-minded individuals who have made it against the rules now. *shrugs* I do not feel this the ruling is fair but its not my descision. However, flinging insults and threats at me and my freinds because you obviously have a problem with our ethics is completely uncalled for. This is the last time I respond to idiocy like this. Grow up and act like an adult that you are. Becuase if your not an adult then you had no buisiness reading my stories and you are quite hypocrite to get on my case for breaking rules!
| Someone chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
Break the rules, get reported, it's as simple as that. A lot of other sites will allow NC-17 material, so the authors should post it there. Then there's no problem. The problem arises when certain authors think they are above the rules and it's all right if they break them. It isn't. You have no right to whine if you get caught. You sound like a constipated baby.
| Star angel chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
Your that laura bitch who has been reporting,
all the Hilde nc-17 fics aren't you? if it
takes me the rest of my life, Ill get you
for this, and thats a promise.
| Someone chapter 1 . 11/23/2002
You have a real nerve complaining that you can't post your porn here. It isn't wanted, so shove off and don't let the door hit ya! I'll be checking out the authors on your favorites list to see if they also blatantly ignored the rules of this site. If so, bye bye to them!
| mama-sama chapter 1 . 11/21/2002
hello! great story, it was dark and angsty but i loved it!