|Reviews for The Ever Twisting Path|
| woodyt chapter 61 . 8/22/2015
Ah loved this too. Thank you
| Miriamele chapter 61 . 1/27/2013
I loved this story, but I'm still not sure how to explain what mommy was laughing at to my four year old after this last chapter :)
| Sweet Shy Suz chapter 61 . 2/26/2011
Another entertaining story! Oh but poor Remus,I felt so sorry for him. I'm off to read the third installment!
| gennastar chapter 9 . 9/25/2009
iF eVANGEline is the only person who can recover objects from a painting, why not give it to her for safekeeping?
| dont fail chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
You are such an amazing writer.
No ones fiction has ever kept me so entertained as yours has.
I must say, some of the Lupin/Evangeline romance did seem to bore me a tad, and I did skip a few chapters because of it. I was so anxious reading through the Lupin stage because all I wanted was Evangeline and Severus together.
I cried when Severus "died." I'm not too sure why I cried, but I did. The love between Severus and Evangeline was touching.
When you started writing about Severus' time in the cell, I had a hope that he was still alive. But for awhile I thought you were filling us in on the moments before his death, i'm SO GLAD I was wrong!
I hope you continue with Evangeline and Severus!
| Ezmerelda chapter 61 . 6/28/2005
Poor Mr. Filch! But it makes for a nice honeymoon for our couple.
Thanks for writing! ~"~
| Ezmerelda chapter 60 . 6/28/2005
Beautiful wedding! And I have to say that I much prefer the type of dress you described Evangeline having. I don't understand the new trend that has brides dressing like hookers, in dresses way too tight, too short, too abbreviated. I guess I think that all brides should look like princesses on their wedding days.
Thanks for writing! ~"~
P.S. I was so relieved at the way you worked out the situation between Remus, Severus and Evangeline. I truly want Remus to be happy, eventually, with someone else. :)
| Watch.The.Rain chapter 61 . 3/14/2005
You should have another part to this... I really would like to see Snape as a dad... HeHe..
| Little Tigger chapter 61 . 12/21/2004
I enjoyed this story alot. You have a real gift.
I thought this bit with them shagging all over the school was a bit crass and totally un-Snapish. He seems like a proper gentleman (very Victorian in fact) and only a miscretant would do such a thing. If they are a respectable married couple they should not be having sex in the school at all. Married couples should have their own homes for just that reason. It was a disappointment to me because your Snape was a really soft guy and I expected better from him.
Anyway... I read both stories back to back and I do appreciate the HOURS and HOURS of free entertainment. I REALLY did enjoy the look into your imagination (except for the sex at school).
| EriksKitty chapter 61 . 12/5/2004
Poor Filch! *snickers*
Oh, you are way too nice. I spotted a couple of places where I would torture Severus and Evangeline even more. *wonders what this says about herself* So I'm glad you're the one writing it, because I do so love seeing Severus happy. There were instances where I wanted to stop and make a comment or two along the way about particularly witty lines, or cute moments, or angst-filled hell, but finishing was a priority. Good ending! Can't wait to read the next one.
~ Kitty -.-
| Welshwitch-star chapter 61 . 3/18/2004
I have enjoyed the read very much, I've read both stories about Evangeline and Snape straight after each other and I must say I love Evangeline. What an original job she has.
Your Snape is sweeter and more kind than most others I read, and he is lovely that way. Even though I also like it when Snape has a darker side.
The bowling alley was a great invention, even though I can't imagine Snape ever doing that, it was very comical and I think he would enjoy it! LOL.
Thanks for the many hours of pleasant reading!
See you in LJ land!
| RivanKnight chapter 61 . 1/8/2004
it's me again :)
beautiful ending to the sequel.
Very glad that things are working out fine for the two lovebirds. you didn't exactly mention what happen to lucius though, is he gonna make a comeback? Hmm..with fudge running about, it's not impossible.
great piece of work! :)
| RivanKnight chapter 42 . 12/2/2003
wow I'm tremendously enjoying this rollercoaster ride! Lots of ups and downs and the characters are definitely in character and credible.
Love the way you deal with Fudge! Mwahah! I hope his empire falls soon! And that chocolate bit for Lucius is bloody brilliant, very apt punishment!
Will be reading more soon!
| RivanKnight chapter 10 . 11/24/2003
I'm back! kekeke..
oh man! betrayer! i hope evange is alright! and may snape be in time to safe her or at least pass a message to albus n the rest!
ps: im reading 10 at a go.. heheh
| rickfan37 chapter 61 . 9/6/2003
The last few chapters of this were fun. I loved hearing Lupin’s inner dialogue and I also think your exchange between him and Snape before the wedding was well done.
My only little quibble is over grammar; I’ve noticed that a lot of your dialogue ends in a full stop. This makes Word capitalise the succeeding pronoun, and then it jars a little when I read it. If you end someone’s speech with a comma, this won’t happen. For example;
~“Good.” He murmured and drew her into a passionate kiss~
~“That’s because I’m concentrating on your more appealing qualities.” She teased~
The epilogue was great! I love the idea of making love to Snape in every room at Hogwarts, LOL! OOh, yes I do. And you really got me going when they found the hidden study. I held my breath, convinced something bad would happen, but you wrong-footed me again and it was just another place for a quick shag! I’m joking, I get the feeling you’ll be using it again, and not only as another poignant scene in the sequel as Evangeline prepares to leave Hogwarts.