|Reviews for Dan Granger|
| johlmann chapter 23 . 4/24
Couldn’t stop reading this! An excellent story—thank you for it!
Health and happiness to you, too! :)
| johlmann chapter 7 . 4/23
I liked the nod to Bobmin...
The story is amazing!
| Devilking1994 chapter 20 . 4/18
Wow Cho really needs to be put away what she's done is nothing like what Dan and Ben did they were fighting a war acting more like soldiers she was just a murderer
| TheBlackHand724 chapter 23 . 3/24
as a fan of all of your work, especially No Thanks and Madam Bones. i think this is your best story. i love your Grangers, and to have Dan and his father-in-law go all Collateral Damage on the Stinkers is just, (chef's kiss) so good. Also Forgotten Weapons on You Tube has a great Delyise carbine show and tell. it's a great gun to use.
Thanks for writing this,
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/6
(Psst: why is Hermione listed in the main-character section of the summary? It should be Dan, Amelia, Harry, Susan's Breasts)
| DanYHKim chapter 23 . 3/2
An excellent story, with a very unique setting.
One terrible conflict in The bank starts everything.
| jaqmaq77 chapter 23 . 2/20
interesting story, but the last chapter felt rushed and left a few things hanging out to dry, but still, it was good.
Six months later Rookwood, bored, went to the local casino, made the mistake of chatting up a Mafia Dons bit on the side, got knifed in the kidneys and bled out on the way to the hospital...
Harry, Susan and Hermione got drunk and woke naked in bed together... after a bit of an awkward talk, they decided to try a three way relationship that ended up becoming permanent after both girls popped out twins nine months later...
And the rest is history...
| ara.wilgin chapter 23 . 2/11
what a great story!
i loved it!
AS an adult reading about other adults and their way of solving problems is much more enjoyable than reading about angsty teenagers.
your unique story was amazing, thank you!
| Detsella Morningdew chapter 7 . 1/28
While I think that Goblins have blood quills, I doubt that they are the only ones that make binding contracts.
My thoughts are, Umbridge clearly does not have the creativity to make the quills herself, and if she did, they would likely take less time for permanent damage. Same if they were just dark/cursed objects in general. They must have a legitimate use. (But obviously would need to be regulated.)
| suziq968 chapter 23 . 1/24
I guess I must have skipped this because it was incomplete. What a joy it was to find and read it now, plus so many recommendations! Thank you! This is something I can easily see my dad and older brother doing for our family. They are both gone now but it was nice to think of them.
| thebetawholived chapter 7 . 1/17
I love your portrayal of Amelia Bones.
DeLisle Carbine is an interesting bit of kit. I imagine a good investigator might find bullets on autopsy, as a through-and-through is less likely on subsonic 45 bullets.
For what it's worth, I am really enjoying your story! I enjoy all your work, and you're on my favorite authors list.
| Boomshanka chapter 23 . 1/15
Just like Atonement... instead of Harry, its Dan and Ben blasting with guns.
It's fine, I guess...
| Zile0 chapter 23 . 11/26/2020
I enjoy reading your stories and I love your writing style. The interactions with McGonagall are hilarious and I take note of every story you recommend. Thank you.
| asdrake chapter 9 . 11/10/2020
If you think the Accidental Animagus is good you should also like the Natural Animagus
| GinnyPotter1986 chapter 1 . 10/21/2020
what is the TWT?