Holy shit, what is up with wizards dying by automobile?

Another nit I picked up on, Dirk Cresswell was a muggleborn and Umbridge was a half-blood though she took great pains to hide it.

It never says in any of tge books whether Susan is an orphan as far as I remember. In book five it referenced after the Azkaban breakout that her uncle and his family were murdered by Dolohov because she told Harry she understood a bit about what it was like to be him after peoplecontinually hounded her for details.

I've never found the 1911 recoil to be particularly intense, though I will allow that the muzzle does rise quite a bit, making for longer time between follow-up shots. The delisle's design helped compensate for muzzle rise due to the weight on the barrel from the supressor.

The name happy-ending massage was a bit too on the nose but it cracked me up all the same.

Thank god you got Umbridge out of the story in a timely manor. I loved OotP but I was never a fan of how long Umbridge carried on in that book. Also, I love that Dan and Ben are utilizing repeating firearms, the delisle carbine is a very interesting weapon, so kudos for thinking outside the box on that.

You really do like killing wizards with cars.

Not to pick nits but according to canon, there were ten death eaters in Azkaban

I really enjoyed your story.

We do know that the Prime Minister was aware of the magical world. Fudge had the pleasure of informing John Major of Sirius Black's escape. I cannot imagine a situation where he wouldn't make his Queen aware of the magical involvement in the Brockdale Bridge disaster.

this is dumb voldy can hire more people but for some dumb ass reason the ministry can't it makes no sense they would have got rid of whatever law is preventing them from doing it weeks before now

only luna could describe rape in way that makes it sound like it's just another tuesday or something

you might want to have amelia explain to them what a terrorist is first because they probly have no idea if arthor was anything to go by

right the half blood faking being a pureblood lord is not going to drink any muggle booze ever let alone in front of his fallowers

so much for there whole being a secret thing and they will do anything to keep it line hard to do when 1 million or more people read about in the paper and there's photo's