Oooohhhh, Hermione’s in deep sh*t now!

I kind of have this feeling that Lucius knows that this might not be the real Narcissa. If he does, then Hermione is really in for a treat.

Uh oh. Hermione’s gotten herself into a bit of a pickle right now.

OMG! I burst out laughing after reading the part where Hermione was remembering when she was crying into Crookshanks’ fur, he farted on her. I’m still sitting here giggling about it!

Thank you so much for getting Hermione’s middle name correct. Every so often when I read a fanfic, someone will think her middle name is “Jane” instead of “Jean” and it infuriates me to no end. So, thank you for remembering her real middle name.3

Hermione has the same love life as me. (Sarcasm)

You crafted an extraordinarily captivating tale; Fergus's performance at Hermione's house had me laughing uncontrollably. Writing humor with such a deadpan delivery is indeed a rare and commendable skill. I am eagerly looking forward to continuing the story.

Sensational! Best fic I've read in a while. Original and fun and a great portrayal of Lucius

I loved Lucius and Hermione together, but Fergus really stole the show. Great job!

Holy crap what a story!
Plot, character development, smut!

Your style is so enjoyable to read, and your idiom vocabulary (and vocabulary at large) is delightfully diverse. Genuinely felt like reading a real book.

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Oh, that story was wonderful! I loved how dangerous Lucius was at the beginning... I was wondering since when did he know that she wasn't really Narcissa. I can't believe, though, that Hermione would go into this so stupidly unprepared - I mean, she's not 12 anymore! Without checking the wards, without knowing how Narcissa behaves or anything. It would probably be easier to masquerade as Draco. But then of course we wouldn't have such a neat excuse for a romantic relationship to develop ;)
Despite this little illogicality, the story was very pleasant to read, their relationship developed quite naturally, the tension was delicious and the smut scenes rewarding (but oh, could we get a One-shot with this rough play Lucius was advertising...?) Belgium... Oh, I'm so sad this poor, sweet girl is gone! I enjoyed the elfish characters too, even if Fergus was such a nasty piece of work, he was an interesting addition!
All in all, a great read. Thank you for writing it 3

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

I don't often comment but I have to say that your writing is brilliant. I'm thoroughly laughing at Fergus in Hermione's home. You have succeeded in delivering just the kind of humor for my taste. Funny and witty, well done!

Still cracking up by the old elf's remarks in the previous chapter. Hahaha

It was lovely to read and I fell in love with the way Lucius was described