Reviews for Icha Icha Forum: The Orange And Pink Edition |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god they got an earful lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really do hope that they used protection :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapters. I like your transition from lovemaking to the other end of the spectrum in these different chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If only it was a dream... But yeah, chapter 700, still shaking my head... thank goodness for FanFiction! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, and a merry Christmas to you too! That was a great lemon. |
![]() ![]() Another good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short, but VERY sweet Fae! Though I will admit all I could think of were those Extenze commercials (male enhancement pill) that focused on Christmas time. Santa Uzumaki gave Sakura the "gift that keeps on giving"! ;) The setup was excellent though, with Sakura sitting on a disguised Naruto's lap. Some playful banter that helped fuel the mood intimately gives a good indicator how special husband and wife want this Christmas to be... As for the lemon itself? It may have been short, but it certainly was effective. Wild, yet reserved - providing how clear the couple's excitement was towards making love in public! It is very similar to the Hokage office themed chapter in that regard. Though I do think it would have been hilarious if Sakura had wrapped herself in wrapping paper for Naruto! What!? I'm perverted; sue me! :) Good work again! It might be your best work, but it was still fun to read. And I am REALLY looking forward to EOS' lemon that you mentioned. Knowing you...you are going all out on it! |
![]() ![]() i agree that the naruhina ending is a joke but fear not there's a Petition to Shone Jump and Kishimoto This petition will be delivered to: Shone Jump and Kishimoto todayRewrite of Last two chapters of Naruto and Give us Narusaku pairing canon or we boycott Shonen Jump and The Last Movie tell your fellow narusakuers its at change .org |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah - I think you did it right too, Azfaerydust! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! There was just so much emotion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was...sweet & beautiful. Of the 5 chappies you wrote,this is my second first would be the first chapter. A hot, frantic and rough . :P I gotta go change my underwear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww! so cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha. Way to go! |
![]() ![]() ![]() These one-shots give me hope and what could have been. I love the passionate and loving moments these characters have. Please keep going. This is good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a little confused by the breaks. It seems like the whole chapter is one long scene, but the breaks come in at strange points. Are they marking perspective shifts or something else? |