Reviews for Walk on the Moon |
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DeOPOrange chapter 39 . 1/13 Damn, this story gets hard to read at times, not that its bad but it can get heavy. |
DeOPOrange chapter 22 . 1/13 Dang she has the gang at her back now, you love to see it, the instant conversion of chakra also speaks of great things to come in terms of her capabilities. |
DeOPOrange chapter 11 . 1/13 This was one of the possible resolutions to this arc, but not really the one I was hoping for. Either way, I'm still hoping that she retains her goals and leaves eventually and this doesn't turn into classic Naruto, never give up/power of friendship type of story. |
clynnis chapter 2 . 12/26/2024 ooooooo, i wonder how bad it'll hurt when she does leave |
InoSaku chapter 1 . 12/25/2024 Yamanaka Rei? |
GermlinGears chapter 5 . 12/15/2024 Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion, I gain strength. Through strength, I gain power. Through power, I gain victory. Through victory, my chains are broken. Chakra shall free me. - just a little answer to the quote you used As a whole the story is quite well written |
Guest chapter 49 . 12/2/2024 You've been blue balling us for three years, lady. What happens next to our cocky, power hungry menace of a protagonist? |
Guest chapter 48 . 11/20/2024 What the book name? The link. |
priscilla chapter 48 . 11/13/2024 hello i just wanted to say i really enjoyed this fic. you might not be updating it anymore but i found it recently and i really like it. The premise is very enjoyable and the originality of Rei is super intriguing. I love how her goals keep her going and i find that the fact that Rei doesnt like konoha to be very fun, i have never once read a naruto fic where the oc/si wants to become a missing nin. I hope you see this because i had some questions on how you desired the fic to go in the direction you wanted. I am still very curious on the relationship with neji and maybe how she planned to move forward with her plans after she successfully completes it. I dont think youll see it but if you do, heres my email if you have any desire to give me some details about how the fic was supposed to go. My email is SeelaPriscilla and then or / Even if you see this comment many years later please feel free to still send an update, i will still be interested. Anyways thank you for the writing. i very much enjoyed it |
priscilla chapter 49 . 11/13/2024 hello i just wanted to say i really enjoyed this fic. you might not be updating it anymore but i found it recently and i really like it. The premise is very enjoyable and the originality of Rei is super intriguing. I love how her goals keep her going and i find that the fact that Rei doesnt like konoha to be very fun, i have never once read a naruto fic where the oc/si wants to become a missing nin. I hope you see this because i had some questions on how you desired the fic to go in the direction you wanted. I am still very curious on the relationship with neji and maybe how she planned to move forward with her plans after she successfully completes it. I dont think youll see it but if you do, heres my email if you have any desire to give me some details about how the fic was supposed to go. My email is . Even if you see this comment many years later please feel free to still send an update, i will still be interested. Anyways thank you for the writing. i very much enjoyed it |
AsclepiusCato chapter 25 . 10/12/2024 ... |
AsclepiusCato chapter 23 . 10/12/2024 0/10. MC is bipolar. At first appeared sociopathic then displays empathy. Then remorse for something she was prepared for. In this chapter she acts like she was meant to be gone for a day as if she hadn't accepted she might die before going. |
thewriterwithoutagoodname chapter 2 . 10/6/2024 its kind of funny how Rei talks about conditioning as against her sensibilities, considering every country in the world does the same thing some are less subtle (china, USA, others) some more but it is part of any governments agenda and is usually refered to as patriotisim and the movemeent as a whole nationalism |
hooplah chapter 49 . 9/8/2024 Given this is effectively abandoned I would be interested in reading your outlines/plans for the rest of it. |
SomebodyLost chapter 39 . 9/7/2024 That was fun. This particular arc I mean. Well, I don’t condone it in real life but… Rei particularly resonates with me. Someone who hates the ninja world. Someone who wants power. Someone who wants freedom. I’ll probably invent some space time ninjutsu to travel out of their world to be honest if I get isekaid there. But anyway. This third arc about taking advantage of Hinata? It’s an uncomfortable feeling, but it was wonderfully written as well. Because as much as I would like to achieve being a good person, I know that I’ll probably do the same. Even worse if at legal age. Because power is fun and being the master of your fate is intoxicating. So thanks for writing this. I’m very self-aware of what I want and my current capabilities, but in Real Life I know I’m not capable or determined to do the ninja stuff. But Rei doing even dark things somewhat helps in being aware of myself, if that makes sense. She’s the closest OC I’ve seen that does what I want or would do if dumped in the Naruto world. |