Reviews for Walk on the Moon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome and looking forward to the next chapter and see what Rei plans next! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() First degree burns are like first degree murder: worse if lower degree. Third degree burns are like those from an oven, and second degree are worse, with first degree being the worst. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the fight scene was very well written and descriptive, I really enjoyed it! I love the interaction between Rei, Tenten, and Neji. Can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Neji has a nasty surprise coming. I will enjoy that so much. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for so a quick update! I wonder who Rei's 'victim' will be regarding the summoning jutsu? Keep up the excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, you're really good at writing fight scenes. I'm kind of jealous. Also, Tenten is adorable in this chapter. Nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's good, as always but i've been wondering... Is this 'run away' crap is somewhat permanent to the story or it will change after she grew a little more effective thinking device? It's alright to think like that at this point, but when she gets older and more experienced with realities it must become too ridiculous to even consider if you have another options. She does. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So mean! Ending a chapter like that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update, that was a great fight! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tsk tsk tsk Rei chan. I think you're forgetting the most important thing here... THE UCHIHA MASSACRE! Lol, nah jk. Like she gives about Sasuke (has she even met itachi? Much less Tobito...hah. I can't wait to see what happens when she meets him) Update :-)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooo I'm so excited. I'm utterly in love with this story. Way to go Rei! |
![]() ![]() I hope you update soon, it's getting good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm very excited to see how Rei goes about her plan. She acknowledges that her pride sometimes blinds her and I feel that this could be something that she constantly will have to struggle with. Anyway, wonderful chapter so keep up the great work and I look forward to whatever comes next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Meh, Rei is thinking difficult again... It wouldn't surprise me that a lot of answers are in her chakra meditation... She needs to think out of the box ;-) |