Reviews for Walk on the Moon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha this is so fun! She isn't full of angst anymore! She won't be a sasuke-in-the-future-wannabe, yay! And now she have OFFICIALLY befriended neji! Cuz' i think that they HAD to be friends last year. *pouts* oh well. Anyway! Great update and all but please update soon! I wanna read the continuation! *grins* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for you're next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to see just how much influence Rei will have on Ino's life in the future and whether or not she'll still end up a Sasuke fangirl. That little outfit imitation is so cute. Don't know if any reviewer has told you this, but your story is awesome. I'd rate it a top three self-insert/oc fics I've read at this point and I've read a lot of them. You do really well to keep your characters in character and give motive for changes in behaviour. Like Rei's now desire to be a good person, Tentens decision to be Rei's friend after her behaviour and Negi befriending Rei. It's what makes your story crack the nod from good to awesome. Looking forward to your next update [Seriously I check my favourites list everyday, it's sad]. So, update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another awesome chapter - thank you. I kinda wish for Ino to end up (or at least start to) fangirl for Sasuke as in canon...I wonder what Rei will do to him:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So exciting... I'm so excited about this story. I love the way it us developing. I just want to read more and more but there's no more to read (sad face). Good luck Thanks for writing and updating |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! Can't wait to see what the next chapter brings and what Rei is going to do! :) :3 |
![]() ![]() Lost my interest in chapter 11 failed to catch enough to even skim in 12. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh, nice, very nice. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, still one of the most amazing SI- Naruto stories here! :D Btw... what's gonna happen with Lee? T_T |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not exactly how I expected it to happen, but still, Rei and Neji will start to train together and make her Mary-sue side shine even brighter! Really, even tough everybody tells me that a Mary-sue is a no go, I still like it very much. |
![]() ![]() This is my favorite chapter so far! Lately it's been hard to understand or empathize with Rei. She was being very illogical about moving upward in the ranks and so obviously imitating Orochimaru that it kind of hurt to read. She's progressing though as a character as your story moves along. Befriending Tenten was a huge jump for her, I think. She's sweet girl, a thing people never seem to write about. You make Tenten interesting and I love that. Neji being awkward as hell about friends was...oddly charming. Ino was so cute. Her sassiness suddenly emerging had me half waiting for Rei's comeback. When she hugged her though, oh my gosh. She's be such an annoying big sister who spoils Ino and it's the greatest thing. Gah, update soon! |
![]() ![]() Warhammer for the win! Great ending to the first story arc. I didn't see that coming. I'm looking forward to finding out what her style will be and I'm sure a lot of other people are as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Here it is! First found this fic on SFV, but I will never get tired of saying how much I enjoy Rei's character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel that your story deserves a comprehensive critique, but truly, you're doing everything right and I hope you keep doing it. Your one mistake is calling Hashirama trees Hashirama, every time. And you've hit a pet peeve of mine; why isn't Rei picking up sealing? It's only the power of bending time and space, contracting gods, binding demons, and bringing people back from the dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nowai, you're posting this of too? Awesome! |