Reviews for Walk on the Moon
mysticalvoid111 chapter 2 . 3/29/2024
To be honest, I don't really see much issue with the 'will of fire' ideology since it's just another propaganda to bolster nationalism/patriotism, though it might be because of the kingdom-building fictions I read.
Child of Dreams chapter 2 . 3/23/2024
Emiko should not still be pregnant during the Kyuubi incident.
The Kyuubi incident was October 10th while Ino was born September 23rd...
Guest chapter 40 . 3/13/2024
Was nao sensei a root experiment?
Guest chapter 49 . 3/11/2024
I love this so much. Even one more chapter would be great! Make 50 TT
RandoMando47 chapter 36 . 3/11/2024
The Hinata relationship thought processes feel a bit out of character. It seems to tie back to Neji’s point that the MC has seemed a bit off kilter for a few weeks. The logic of the arrangements and what issues Hinata has all make sense but how Rei is thinking about using the levers comes across as problematic. Not in a manipulate for the victim’s own good sort of way, or punish bullies sort of way, more like Rei is some sort of unhealthy domestic abuser. Will read a bit more to see how you manage this plot arc, zoomed out everything is good enough, but this portion is toeing the line.
RandoMando47 chapter 22 . 3/10/2024
Rules suitable for some rat bastards. Yeah, chips are down her spirit animal comes out.
RandoMando47 chapter 15 . 3/10/2024
She was so cool then she ruined it!
(Completely in character and adorable :)
RandoMando47 chapter 11 . 3/10/2024
Awesome twist, both insightful and well executed.
Murderleo chapter 20 . 2/26/2024
Friend, now you are obliged that one of the old rats is called Splinter and that has as disciples 4 turtles of the call of the turtles
Guest chapter 20 . 1/25/2024
Oh goddamn it. Rats?!

Not as cool as wolves or bats.
Guest chapter 18 . 1/25/2024
Theories:
1. Wolves (bc she's a lone wolf!)
2. Bats
3. Rabbits
jixuel chapter 49 . 1/7/2024
When the time finally starts to move forward, the author disappears... What a fucking fate it is to read fanfic
jixuel chapter 31 . 1/7/2024
Ugh, that's the kind of thing that makes me abandon a story immediately... I hope someone realizes what Rei is doing to Hinata and nips it in the bud, I don't know if I can bear to read this without ending up hating the story, a story I've been enjoying reading so much, uuuuugh
D3Diton chapter 49 . 12/13/2023
I always love people's reactions to Gai when he gets a tad bit serious, we all made fun of the dude early on in the series until the madara fight.
D3Diton chapter 39 . 12/13/2023
Rei really is a terrible person
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