Reviews for Walk on the Moon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() To be honest, I don't really see much issue with the 'will of fire' ideology since it's just another propaganda to bolster nationalism/patriotism, though it might be because of the kingdom-building fictions I read. |
![]() ![]() Emiko should not still be pregnant during the Kyuubi incident. The Kyuubi incident was October 10th while Ino was born September 23rd... |
![]() ![]() Was nao sensei a root experiment? |
![]() ![]() I love this so much. Even one more chapter would be great! Make 50 TT |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Hinata relationship thought processes feel a bit out of character. It seems to tie back to Neji’s point that the MC has seemed a bit off kilter for a few weeks. The logic of the arrangements and what issues Hinata has all make sense but how Rei is thinking about using the levers comes across as problematic. Not in a manipulate for the victim’s own good sort of way, or punish bullies sort of way, more like Rei is some sort of unhealthy domestic abuser. Will read a bit more to see how you manage this plot arc, zoomed out everything is good enough, but this portion is toeing the line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rules suitable for some rat bastards. Yeah, chips are down her spirit animal comes out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She was so cool then she ruined it! (Completely in character and adorable :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome twist, both insightful and well executed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Friend, now you are obliged that one of the old rats is called Splinter and that has as disciples 4 turtles of the call of the turtles |
![]() ![]() Oh goddamn it. Rats?! Not as cool as wolves or bats. |
![]() ![]() Theories: 1. Wolves (bc she's a lone wolf!) 2. Bats 3. Rabbits |
![]() ![]() ![]() When the time finally starts to move forward, the author disappears... What a fucking fate it is to read fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh, that's the kind of thing that makes me abandon a story immediately... I hope someone realizes what Rei is doing to Hinata and nips it in the bud, I don't know if I can bear to read this without ending up hating the story, a story I've been enjoying reading so much, uuuuugh |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always love people's reactions to Gai when he gets a tad bit serious, we all made fun of the dude early on in the series until the madara fight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rei really is a terrible person |