Reviews for Walk on the Moon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hmmmm Rei really is super disrespectful, I feel like she should have been curved down by now by someone |
![]() ![]() ![]() complains about how Messed up the shinobi world is but is equally messed up too. you are what you hate |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the MC's current personality and goals. Sadly, I highly doubt her goals will actually happen. 10 dollars on her eventually changing her mind and wanting to protect people that she begrudgingly befriends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don''t know if you noticed already, but you misspelled "Kyuubi" at the beginning of the chapter... |
![]() ![]() I loved this a lot! Nah e you’re beyond fanfics right now but I really hope you come back to give this closure one day even in summary form :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() My skipping immediately bit me because the one sentence that was still off screen identified the summon. Though I wasn't aware that their babies were called "pups" |
![]() ![]() ![]() As interesting as this would be to watch on TV, as a story this sequence drags a lot. About halfway through, I started skipping because I kinda wanna just get back to the plot after she inevitably succeeds after nearly failing, likely with a begrudgingly admiring/praising speech from her new canine summon leader. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Please upload next chapter |
![]() ![]() While I think she’s too sadistic and conniving for someone who loves so deeply, I think you have written a wonderful character. I really hope you’re still writing this series! My biggest problems are with the way Konoha is portrayed, and even THAT I get in the context of the story, and the relationship with Hinata. Otherwise this is one of the best Naruto stories I have ever read. Period. GREAT unique summons too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok |
![]() ![]() Kage in 5 years time so 1 rei graduate 2 ino and main cast graduate and the chunin exam 3-4 time skip 5 shipuden |
![]() ![]() Rei is a super saiyan |
![]() ![]() Character development yes |
![]() ![]() ![]() The drama is Fcking STUUUUUUPID, She live in a world of kill or be killed, they should have been very proud of her cause she can survive more when another war occurs. War in narutoverse is like a decade thing. Anyway its STUPID(Asian Accent) |
![]() ![]() ![]() well that is predictable when they say "FAMILY" as a bald man once said "You don't turn your back from the family" LOL |