it's been about 8 years now and you've been focusing too much on your undertale fanfiction have you forgotten about this

Please continue this is my favorite Pokemon fanfiction I've read it multiple times and am about to do so again it would be so sad if this story died I understand life happens but I love this story so please continue

Ok I see that this story hasn't been updated in years yet I noticed you have written other new content. I'm not sure if you will ever read this but will you please consider continuing this story you have too great a concept to leave it here. This is honestly one of the greatest wholesome fanfictions I've read please pick this back up

KILL PIKACHU I DON'T consider it Ash's Pikachu SO DEATH

What about Damien though? That guy needs to go to jail for abuse and attempted murder of a pokemon, his pokemon have to be taken away and he has to be banned from keeping any pokemon ever again.

Why the heck did Misty accept Ash offer to pay her back for her totalled bike!? That Pikachu's actions are in absolutely no way his fault. He didn't even have it for a whole day.
Btw, I really like the idea of Misty having a bug type. It really might help lower her fear of bug types to general nervousness around the ones she's not familiar with and general preference to keep a good distance from Beedrill whether wild or trained and wild territories. As for Misty's story about getting stung up by a bunch of Beedrill, I'm actually surprised she survived that encounter. There must have been someone nearby to scare them off and take her to a hospital. Beedrill stingers aren't small and they aren't very merciful either.
Regarding Ash's new fear of electric types, it would be nice if he eventually got over it altogether or at least mostly. He of course can retain some weariness around them, especially Pikachu and their evolutionary line.

Ive swung back around to read this again and while it has been a while I still enjoy this fic quite a lot. I hope that maybe one day this will be continued or at least be given attention again. Though if things are crazy Irl I get it.

As part of my annual "read my favorite fanfics," I came to visit. I still love your story.

Out of the many Pokemon fics I've run across, this is the BEST one I've run into! While I know you haven't been posting for years, I can only hope that hopefully you will return to this gem some day.

The original take at anime Pokemon cast in the trio's teams, the refreshing new Pokemon originals from names to personalities and training, and this smart Ash take... it's all ABSOLUTELY GLORIOUS! As for Pikachu, while I've no doubt he'll return and apologize per poll pieces, it's a pity the little brat couldn't join in this version with this awesome original team you have for Ash and co. Still in the sake of trying something different despite the vast gulf of set victory for Pikachu's fate, in the event this fic continues, I'd like to see option 1 of how Pikachu's fate at the end of the Spearow Colony works - much more preferable a vote than the portrayed anti-human Pikachu joining a human organization that willingly enslaves Pokemon, an affront to all this Pikachu's depiction detests to freedom.

Dragon I hope you have been well, the only complaint I have with this story is that you haven't got is that you never finished when one door closes. I've seen you put out newer stuff please resume this story it would mean the world

Can you pleas update this story again?

AWESOME BINGED THIS WISH THERE WAS MORE

Great story hope to read more of it

I'm guessing the scale is a Dragon Scale. Too bad this hasn't been updated in six years so this story is most likely discontinued.

So AJ beaten 100 trainers in a row already, that or some special visit due to needing unique supplies... either way, good luck for him on trying to escape from the rocket trio's thirst for his sandshrew.