|Reviews for The Beginnings of a Future Pirate King|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/10
| Great chapter 17 . 6/1
Would have been great* if it wasnt a complete copy of canon
| verday chapter 4 . 5/26
My little brother word for me was Kaka it made me happy and sad. My name actually starts wit too.
| Faezier chapter 63 . 2/17
Absolutely Loved it! Ima read the sequel now
| Jaricchi chapter 63 . 10/10/2017
it was absolutely brilliant. thank u for sharing this. im on my phone so i cnt spazz properly, but know that this is awesome. take care
| arinasution5 chapter 63 . 9/26/2017
| Ursularix chapter 63 . 7/23/2017
First, thank you so much for an absolutely delightful story. I was a bit skeptical at first, as the combi of Luffy and growing up with the WBP couldve gone very wrong. But I loved it, from his toddler stage to the 17y old setting out to collect his nakama!
I really enjoyed your subtle humour, like luffy dragging one leg as a toddler. Great job with developing the characters and relationships, I could really see Ace grow, Luffy change and Marco's realizations. I'm amazed how you managed to make WB the father figure Luffy would need, while still portraying him as a parent who gives equal attention to every son.
And lastly, great, great job and surprise how you took original plots and dialogues and weaved them into your story. The part "2 years later" made me so happily excited when I recognized the words! I loved that Luffy got his tattoo, but in an inconspicuous place as he will sail under his own flag.
I am looking forward how you'll continue this story, as it starts out with Luffy being so much stronger than the original already. Feels like he's at the level of after the timeskip. Will his nakama have become that strong as well? Especially Nami and Usopp, who had a 2-year warning in advance.
Thank you for this great story, I squealed and laughed and felt with the characters.
Can't wait for the sequel, hope you will finish it, as this prequel is too good to be left incomplete.
| Ravenclaw Slytherin chapter 63 . 6/30/2017
This story was so amazing and cute, and wonderful! I can't wait to go read the next one!
| kyliesnow chapter 1 . 4/14/2017
| Mr. Blackwood chapter 63 . 3/29/2017
This is an amazing story, I just finished it and I love it a lot :D now I'm going to continue with your sequel so wish me luck xD
| LadyTeldra chapter 1 . 3/28/2017
This is very similar to the start "It Takes a Village (Or a Pirate Crew)"...
I'll probably read this later. It's late and I have things to do in the morning.
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/2/2017
But bullets don't hurt luffy?
| Sherlock D Holmes chapter 63 . 12/29/2016
Well, I guess it's over. I can't say that I didn't enjoy the story. It certainly did make me feel sorta fuzzy and warm inside, and it was very entertaining. You made their relationships so believable and I just can't have enough of Thatch. You turned a barely touched on character into such a lovable persona, Id hate to see him die. whatever the case, except for a few Canon rippoffs that pissed me off, your story was alright. I guess I'll give it an 8/10. You should REALLY watch out for run on sentences. It's like you don't know that the comma and fullstop keys exist. Jesus mang its basic punctuation Gahhh. I can't wait to read your sequel.
| Sherlock D Holmes chapter 52 . 12/29/2016
Marco doesn't say Yoi all the time, and it's getting to the point where I can't even take him seriously yoi
| Sherlock D Holmes chapter 39 . 12/29/2016
How the hell is Law a pirate when Luffy is only 12? Isn't he a supernova, and aren't all supernovas rookies? If Law has been a pirate for five years, then he wouldn't a rookie.