Great story. Would love to see this expanded.

Good enough "What if" story.

So, did Ginny Weasley die next year, because Harry was not a Parslemouth any more?

Great story!

I don't know if I've reviewed this before, but it's a very enjoyable story, but it seems that it could be fleshed out more, what you have in these two chapters is half developed outline, and half a chapter. You are telling us that Poppy and Andromeda tear into Albus, but we don't see it, and I was really looking forward to seeing Albus getting torn a new arsehole!

Anyway, thanks for the story

Great story

Well done
Draco122

Enjoyed reading this again. Glad Harry became part of a happy family. Thanks!

Great story! I loved how you exposed McGonagall and Dumbledore as being incompetent, abusive, and downright dangerous. The ending, with Harry getting a new life with caring people, was perfect!

This story is great! I always thought that it was ridiculous how no one ever noticed or seemed to care that Harry was abused by his relatives in the original books. It seems the magical world lacks common sense after all. I mean: Really? Three aurors went to rescue him in the fifth book and didn't notice he was too short for his age, underfed and malnourished? What kind of BS was that? They should have noticed that at once! I mean, come on, not even Mrs. Weasley believed Fred and George when they told her that there were bars on his window? Idiots. All of them! They all call him a hero for his defeat of Voldemort one minute and ignore him the next? I always thought this was so wrong how no one seemed to notice or care about Harry!

Albus is a bit too alive at the end, but at least he was stopped. (I have a real *problem* with headbastards.)

Love it

good

This was sweet! I really enjoyed it and loved how Dumbles got put in his place for endangering Harry. It was about time that happened, the horrible old man should have been treated to the same things poor Harry had to go through. I'd like to see HIM having to dodge Petunia's frying pan without the use of magic!

This was a wonderful fic. It left me wanting to learn more about this universe, which is always a good thing. I loved the interactions between Harry and Madam Pomfrey and Harry's reactions to the crazyness at Hogswarts seemed realistic to me (much more realistic than the non-reaction in the books. Thanks for sharing!

This was a sweet story. I really liked how Madam Pomfrey took notice of Harry's health issues and did her best to help him, regardless of what the Headmaster wanted. I especially liked how she stood up for him when he needed the support throughout the story. I kinda wish there was more of this. It would have been nice to see how everything goes for Harry in the long run. I have a feeling that Dumbledore isn't done meddling.