Reviews for Noticed
Reichenfaust chapter 2 . 3/17/2015
That capture by Flitwick was awesome! Loved that the professor captured Voldemort's shade with goblin spells. Really cool way for Harry to start the next but of his life.
monbade chapter 2 . 3/9/2015
good story but needs a year 2
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Monbade
Saissa chapter 2 . 3/8/2015
Hermione is a really arrogant little git!

I would NOT be dragging Hernione off to the Hospital wing for a calming draught when sge gas one her her hysterical episodes.

Instead I would be telling Hermione that she was perfectly free to be as hysterical as she wanted to be, over her exams, but she absolutely had to go and be hysterical someplace else and not in the common room.

WHY? Because she was acting like a damn baby with all her screaming and temper tantrums and there was NO reason for her to be subjecting the rest of the students to her temper tantrums.
richardrobinsonjr chapter 2 . 3/1/2015
I liked this and wouldn't mind seeing a sequel.

Seeing what Harry's life is like without the original Voldemort ( Tom Riddle is I believe independent of
Oldie Moldie and I would think could still function.

Richard Robinson
wildtrance chapter 2 . 3/1/2015
absolutely perfect!
Hektols chapter 2 . 2/22/2015
A pity that the Dursleys didn't get any punishment but great work with Dumbledore being suspended for turning the school into such death trap.

Laughed a lot when Flitwick defeated Voldemort and good point with another house winning the cup, not all happy endings have to be perfect.
Hektols chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
Great points, those abused Harry fics don't make sense, the adults would have found out.

It would have been great if they told the parents of the bullies, Molly appearing and scolding the twins would have been priceless.
savannavansmutsmut chapter 2 . 2/15/2015
I loved this alternative, I wish there was more. Thank you for sharing it.
atymer chapter 2 . 2/7/2015
Enjoyed this little two shot very much. Proactive adults not slobbering all over that git Dumpy. Yahoo for Flitwick and goblin magic. lol Take that Moldy and Dumpy! War over. lol
I like long stories and rarely have shorts on my fav list, but I love a hybrid getting rid of Voldy. *razzberry at Dumpy*
Can he go to jail? Oh too late story over. sigh...
Hobbyfarmer chapter 2 . 2/7/2015
Great story Thanks
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 2/5/2015
Excellent idea!
Stormshadow13 chapter 2 . 2/4/2015
Awsome fic! really fun to read and Poppy was great!
Lokiismylife chapter 2 . 1/29/2015
That was really sweet and well-written.
Olaf74 chapter 2 . 1/27/2015
*simply smiles*
Guest chapter 2 . 1/18/2015
Badass scary healer Poppy FTW!
XD
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