Reviews for Noticed
SoSoLazy chapter 1 . 7/28/2022
Healing
WhatHaveIDiscovered chapter 2 . 6/25/2022
Good story. Interesting way to to take things, and that was a decent look into a possible future from this end point. Thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2022
F.I.N.E. equals Freaked-out, Insecure, Neurotic & Emotional!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/9/2022
Harry taking it up the ass and immediately forgiving people who hurt him is typical with this author. Author is a masochist who'd clap and fuck their own ass if a child was being raped in front of him. A pathetic spineless who'd rather hide in his closet as his wife cheats the fuck out of him.
E.Elliot chapter 2 . 3/27/2022
I like it!xD
Nini chapter 2 . 3/23/2022
Wonderful! I love how they take care of Harry! And how he don't go the forest. I love this ending, so you!
Eriktheviking70 chapter 2 . 2/7/2022
A great diversion from canon.
Latarra chapter 2 . 1/2/2022
I like it.
CarolWim chapter 2 . 11/26/2021
Great story, happy ending. Thank you.
Marj123 chapter 1 . 11/7/2021
Nice little story. Thank you.
shadowwolf76 chapter 2 . 9/22/2021
either continue or make a sequel please, it was great.
NotBad chapter 2 . 8/19/2021
I liked the little two-shot. It's my second read through and it was just as good as the first time.
My only gripe is you using the fanfic trope of a 'magical core'. There's no such thing. All you needed to say was the magic was drained and no one would question it. Adding people having a core that can be damaged or affected, just undermines the core of the story. Did you see what I did there? Does your story have a core that can be damaged if abused? ;)
Nathow chapter 1 . 7/21/2021
Fantastic writing well done keep up the good work and please update very soon with more magnificent chapters
Guest chapter 2 . 6/14/2021
Great story!
annette-ella chapter 2 . 4/24/2021
Great Story
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