Reviews for Noticed |
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SoSoLazy chapter 1 . 7/28/2022 Healing |
WhatHaveIDiscovered chapter 2 . 6/25/2022 Good story. Interesting way to to take things, and that was a decent look into a possible future from this end point. Thanks for sharing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2022 F.I.N.E. equals Freaked-out, Insecure, Neurotic & Emotional! |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/9/2022 Harry taking it up the ass and immediately forgiving people who hurt him is typical with this author. Author is a masochist who'd clap and fuck their own ass if a child was being raped in front of him. A pathetic spineless who'd rather hide in his closet as his wife cheats the fuck out of him. |
E.Elliot chapter 2 . 3/27/2022 I like it!xD |
Nini chapter 2 . 3/23/2022 Wonderful! I love how they take care of Harry! And how he don't go the forest. I love this ending, so you! |
Eriktheviking70 chapter 2 . 2/7/2022 A great diversion from canon. |
Latarra chapter 2 . 1/2/2022 I like it. |
CarolWim chapter 2 . 11/26/2021 Great story, happy ending. Thank you. |
Marj123 chapter 1 . 11/7/2021 Nice little story. Thank you. |
shadowwolf76 chapter 2 . 9/22/2021 either continue or make a sequel please, it was great. |
NotBad chapter 2 . 8/19/2021 I liked the little two-shot. It's my second read through and it was just as good as the first time. My only gripe is you using the fanfic trope of a 'magical core'. There's no such thing. All you needed to say was the magic was drained and no one would question it. Adding people having a core that can be damaged or affected, just undermines the core of the story. Did you see what I did there? Does your story have a core that can be damaged if abused? ;) |
Nathow chapter 1 . 7/21/2021 Fantastic writing well done keep up the good work and please update very soon with more magnificent chapters |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/14/2021 Great story! |
annette-ella chapter 2 . 4/24/2021 Great Story |