In general, I am not a fan of short stories as few fanfiction writers have the skill to make a short work complete - but you have that skill. I am enjoying the four or five short inces I have read. (If you're wondering, I have a lot of tme to read right now because I was injured this summer and have several broken bones. So I am working my way through your completed HP stories. I don't always comment, but I enjoy them all.)

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Even if the Fiction is almost 4 years old it is a really nice story and I would have loved to know more about Garrys new life.

Some reviewer seems to forget that it was Dumbledore that did wrongfully give points to Gryffindor so that they could win the house cup even if they where at the end of the year place 4. If it would have been correct Slytherin would have won the housecup since they did earn the points in the classes and not for dangerouse adventures combined with rulebreaking.

But stil I would have liked to read more from thus story and maybe some of the next years and Harrys life. The topic Sirius is still possible. If Lucius would still give the journal to Ginny or if Voldemort would rise again I don't know.

Nice little story and different to most others that cover first year at Hogwarts.

- Hip

Great story.

It figures that the snakes would win the cup with Snape as headmaster now. If was to continue as Headmaster no house other then the snakes will win the cup. I do like that there was no confrontation between the Tonks and the Dursley at the train station. Vernon must be mad that his servant is no longer there to mow his low, do his laundry and cook his meals.

This was a great and fun story. Keep up the good work.

Fantastic story!

You could really build on this story! ...you must needs to find the muse!

Very good story! Go Flitwick!

Love it! Most fics center as an independent Harry and what I don't get from Rowling is that he's still a child! I get that it's an adventure fantasy book but like the wizards, Rowling lacks common sense when treating child abuse and dangers.

White Angel of auralon, you fanfiction is Amazing. Thank you very much for being one of the rare fanfic writers to seem caring about imagining other things that romantic relationships after the wizarding war. You have an awesome imagination. It's nice to see that someone cares about changing Harry's past not imagining his future. Although I don't doubt that you'd be great at it given you great creativity. Thank you.

A very nice story, the only bad part was that they chose a famous child abuser as the new headmaster. Snape is famous for verbally abusing students and ignoring bullying and attacks from his favorites, so he is not much of an upgrade.

Wow, great story!

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