|Reviews for Dawn of the Tok'ra|
| Fast Frank chapter 20 . 5/23
"...short of a Goa'uld healing device." which Dawn/Ora should have had access to.
| KnowInsight chapter 26 . 12/12/2019
| Fast Frank chapter 26 . 8/22/2018
Dawn/Ora still have a whole bundle of scrolls they haven't got around to studying, yet.
| Jonn Wolfe chapter 26 . 8/10/2017
This is a fantastic story. Hope the muse comes back for it!
| CSKTECH chapter 2 . 3/28/2017
Ok first off, Apologies for not trusting you. I've avoided this story because the cross didn't seem to work, boy was I wrong. Dawn is one of my fav characters so this should be a heck of a ride... Buffy and Willow, not so much..
Looking forward to the rest.
| Wednesday's Jest chapter 15 . 11/25/2016
I don't dislike the premise, but the humor feels off. While I appreciate that you are trying to replicate the feel of the original show, the attempt comes across as forced. This isn't something I've found in your other stories. Perhaps a measure of fidelity can be sacrificed if the end result is the better for it?
Thank you for your effort.
| brendafay chapter 26 . 11/13/2016
| Grovtech chapter 26 . 10/26/2016
I can see the Captain and crew aren't so happy with Dawn, Ora, and Xander. I'm looking forward to seeing what's going to happen next.
| AnimeA55Kicker chapter 26 . 10/25/2016
I have the solution to this problem! Don't go back for like a decade and hope she forgot.
| mobulis chapter 26 . 10/25/2016
They need to go to the marvel universe, the best science and magic experts are there.
| Difdi chapter 26 . 10/24/2016
You have a very odd bit of what I assume is local slang in this chapter. I mention it because it's not something that would be part of the speech patterns of either the Starfleet personnel or people from California.
The bit of slang I am talking about is the phrase fall pregnant. Fall is a bizarre word choice by Californian or Starfleet standards. Women get pregnant or become pregnant in those dialects, never fall pregnant.
| XRaiderV1 chapter 26 . 10/24/2016
as always, well done good sir
| kittyranma chapter 25 . 10/17/2016
wonderful I can't wait for the next part.
| Grovtech chapter 25 . 4/16/2016
Very kool installment! All the characters sounded very true and I loved Dawn's and Xanders geek banter.
Really good Stuff!
| chaoswizard chapter 25 . 4/9/2016
Keep it coming plz