|Reviews for Dawn of the Tok'ra|
| CSKTECH chapter 2 . 13h
Ok first off, Apologies for not trusting you. I've avoided this story because the cross didn't seem to work, boy was I wrong. Dawn is one of my fav characters so this should be a heck of a ride... Buffy and Willow, not so much..
Looking forward to the rest.
| Wednesday's Jest chapter 15 . 11/25/2016
I don't dislike the premise, but the humor feels off. While I appreciate that you are trying to replicate the feel of the original show, the attempt comes across as forced. This isn't something I've found in your other stories. Perhaps a measure of fidelity can be sacrificed if the end result is the better for it?
Thank you for your effort.
| brendafay chapter 26 . 11/13/2016
| Grovtech chapter 26 . 10/26/2016
I can see the Captain and crew aren't so happy with Dawn, Ora, and Xander. I'm looking forward to seeing what's going to happen next.
| AnimeA55Kicker chapter 26 . 10/25/2016
I have the solution to this problem! Don't go back for like a decade and hope she forgot.
| mobulis chapter 26 . 10/25/2016
They need to go to the marvel universe, the best science and magic experts are there.
| Difdi chapter 26 . 10/24/2016
You have a very odd bit of what I assume is local slang in this chapter. I mention it because it's not something that would be part of the speech patterns of either the Starfleet personnel or people from California.
The bit of slang I am talking about is the phrase fall pregnant. Fall is a bizarre word choice by Californian or Starfleet standards. Women get pregnant or become pregnant in those dialects, never fall pregnant.
| XRaiderV1 chapter 26 . 10/24/2016
as always, well done good sir
| kittyranma chapter 25 . 10/17/2016
wonderful I can't wait for the next part.
| Grovtech chapter 25 . 4/16/2016
Very kool installment! All the characters sounded very true and I loved Dawn's and Xanders geek banter.
Really good Stuff!
| chaoswizard chapter 25 . 4/9/2016
Keep it coming plz
| The Wandmaker chapter 25 . 4/3/2016
Oh, i just love this chapter! I love the idea that Xander is living a Trekkie Gerk's dream and it would be so hilarious for a serious Enterprise crew realizing that they are just beloved, fictional characters in an alternate universe. The thing with Guinan really adds another dimension (no pun intended) to the story.
I also enjoy any crossover story which includes the limitless possibilities of an appearance by Q!
| Malix2 chapter 25 . 4/3/2016
Great to see a new chapter. Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to reading more. :)
| brendafay chapter 24 . 3/30/2016
| Grovtech chapter 24 . 3/1/2016
Oh what a cliffhanger! LOL!
I was wondering if he was going to show and there he is.