Reviews for SSB: Letting Off Steam
cheese.1000lb chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
As a Dark Pit main, this speaks volumes to me. Good work.
amyrose112244 chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
That was nice of little mac.
Me: hey Lucina.
Lucina: yea?
Me: why do people hate clone charicters?
Lucina: because they are jerks.
Me: or like pick on them.
Lucina: that's true.
SkYeLiMiT chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
Uuugghh this is just what i needed! People need to stop bitching 'bout Pittoo being in the roster and understand why Sakurai included him. But I guess that's asking too much out of ignorant people.

You did great in portraying Dark Pit's character and anger towards the comments with the "I don't give a damn" attitude. And I can totally see Mac being a blunt, non-discriminate fighter. (Probably from all those times he got called 'short' if you now what I mean)
Varanus K chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
That was very nice... The ending was just perfect.
Lolrus555 chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
short, sweet, simple, and interesting. Just the way i like them.
Bowser Jr. Fan chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
This is nice! There has been some backlash to Dark Pit's inclusion, and it's interesting to see how he deals with that in-universe. This is interesting! Please keep going!
Sincerely-Serendipity chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
That ending gave me diabetes. I love your writing style.