Reviews for Breakfast in the Dunes
Jean Driver chapter 38 . 8/30
I really enjoyed this story! The characters were such a wonderful blend of the known and the new!Thank you!
shannon30033 chapter 38 . 4/20
Thanks! Super fun story! Good pacing, great characters. I especially liked Esme. Thanks again!
maggiegurle chapter 38 . 2/25
Great read! Thx!
it's simply me n you chapter 20 . 2/4
You can feel the heartbreak of Bella.
Somehow I feel that Edward may be not doing well either, although he may be masking it with hanging out with the wrong people, etc.
timidvampire chapter 38 . 2/1
really enjoyed this story, great ending too
Bevey99 chapter 38 . 7/26/2016
Good story from start to finish. Thank you so much for writing in this medium. Fanfiction Forever
tinksauble chapter 38 . 7/25/2016
I loved how flawed Edward is in this story. Thanks for taking the time to write it!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2016
how can Edward be a Cullen when you said he was Esme's brother and Carlisle's last name is Cullen. You need to make up your mind as to whether he is Esme's brother (who would have her maiden name as his sir name) or Carlisle's brother and therefor a Cullen.
I'llbethereforyou1234 chapter 6 . 3/2/2016
You should change the name of your story, it's not... right...
Guest chapter 38 . 2/24/2016
Wonderful story!
dorothybert chapter 38 . 1/26/2016
Such a lovely story. Thanks
sosueme chapter 1 . 12/18/2015
Loved this look into the music scene and the world of abuse / recovery. This bella was refreshing - strong, opinionated, smart, but still young, vulnerable. And I liked this edward, even as unlikable as he was in the beginning! His steps seemed logical but still had that edge of needing to grow up and the satisfaction of taking baby steps to get there. Thanks for sharing your talent ;-)
jesigrl007 chapter 38 . 12/7/2015
It took me 4 days to read this story. So worth me staying up in til 2 am on a Sunday to finish it. I can't wait to read more of your stuff!
noot40 chapter 12 . 11/30/2015
I love your writing, but are you going to address the age gap? It's a pretty big deal -yes? 30 years to 18
Atwiggs chapter 38 . 11/14/2015
Thank you for writing this beautiful story. You have so much talent sweetie. I truly loved this story and I could definitely relate to Edwards recovery.

God Bless you!
-Anita (Atwiggs)
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