About the dream circle I think you could have started for his beginning so she could understand better even the middle so the grial war. So she has some context or him killing apostles.

You started by the end which was the most difficult part to understand. Here he looked more like mercenary than a hero, when he wasn’t an enforcer anymore he was hunted by the clock tower and he helped where war was trying to save people. So his work was less understandable.

At that point in life he was just where Alaya wanted him.

You do know fallen Angels can’t be made right? The evil piece system is owned by the devils and no other faction has the ability to turn humans into there race at this point in that universe. Now turn him to their SIDE maybe and recruit him sure! But not actually doing the whole turn into our race thing.

Haha, the cat devil is a thief. The ones saying her and her sis were criminals are right

hehehe, I just find it a bit funny that instead of a hapless human accidentally summoning a devil, its the other way around XD

Why is Issei still in the story? He's literally taking up like a third of the story with his POVs. I assumed due to your AN that he would be unimportant to the story but now I'm having doubts. He's a trash character that should have been killed off immediately IMO so keeping him around is ruining the story for me.

I really, REALLY hope that Issei dies or something. You said in the AN not to worry about it and that we would enjoy him being there but I'm seriously doubtful.

Guh, I really hope you do this right because I HATE Issei with a passion. I'll continue just to see if I find his presence...tolerable.

I have to say, that was a pretty amazing start to a story. Well done.

bruh great red is literaly the apex of everything in dxd

as the dragon of dreams hes practically omnipotent

my guy beat infinity

Nah boy, 2/10. Tooo loooong dialogue, it piss me off.

Kings throughout the ages have always been hungry.-Saber, discussing Saber Lion just before deciding to feed her Lancer

So there's no grail war? 2/10 no point in continuing.

bro 185 cm (6.1) isn't tall. Unless you live in Japan where the average height is 171 cm (5.7).

OHHHH YES I love it thank you

I hate to be the stand in for Gilgamesh here but never in a million years will the "faker" equal to or surpass the "original" in this case. Man I am SOOO disappointed. I saw an update to the story and I was sooo happy that I re-read through the whole story just to get to this...

All I can ask for, or plead for is this... please leave up this work for those to read in the future. It's truly well done and the passion and effort put into it can be felt even as an incomplete work. Thank you for writing and posting up to this point. It was an excellent story.