|Reviews for Remnant's Maelstrom Shinobi|
| A chapter 39 . 10/6
great work in this fic hope to see the continuation soon loved it
| GhostRonin chapter 21 . 4/26
Boy did RT throw your RWBY is the future Naruto-verse theory completely out the window
| Geamsean chapter 2 . 4/17
It hurts me that Jaune is here and why does he irritate you?
| EVIL-SAGE chapter 12 . 3/11
that omake was simply amazing, I knew erosennin was good for something.
| Ethan Rhodes chapter 1 . 2/14
am confuse... did naruto replace jaune? 0.o
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/29
Filler isn't filler if it's character development, I say.
| Vanadis runtah chapter 11 . 1/4
Dude at the start, you absolutely roasted the flamers.
| Spedyalarm chapter 8 . 1/4
I am not gay.
I am not riding Naruto's Dick.
No way in hell.
That is all I have to say for now.
| Spedyalarm chapter 7 . 1/4
a cent is 10x more valuable then lien.
Essentially it's like this 1000 lien 100 dollars. Or 1 cent 10 lien.
| Spedyalarm chapter 6 . 1/4
I agree with the A/N.
Equal Rights, Equal Fights.
| Spedyalarm chapter 5 . 1/3
I also hate the bullying scene.
I despise it with passion, and anytime I see it happening in a fanfiction, and then see Cardin get his ass whooped I like the writer and the one who did the whooping a little bit more.
And if someone doesn't take that opportunity to kick cardin's ass, then I am honestly disapointed.
| Spedyalarm chapter 1 . 1/3
damn. Wish I could've recomended a Naruto weapon.
| Diametrik chapter 18 . 1/1
I was enjoying this, but I can't handle reading you ruining Naruto's character by making him fraternise with such an ends-justify-the-means character. That's literally the antithesis of what he stands for.
| Diametrik chapter 12 . 1/1
I really don't get your characterisation of Naruto in regards to cooperating with Cinder. Even if she has some kind of noble goal, Naruto's whole thing is defeating and then redeeming tragic/well-meaning villains. He definitely would not go along with Cinder's plan, nor would he just sit back and let it happen.
| Diametrik chapter 11 . 1/1
["I never outright lied to you. I never told the full truth, but I never said I was a Faunus, you all just assumed that, because of how I look when I use Kurama's chakra."]
Naruto’s straight-up gaslighting them here. Yes, sometimes he was tricky with his wording so that he wasn't outright lying, merely lying by omission, but several times he did just lie without being tricky.
Never mind the other various lies, here are just the times he’s said he is a faunus:
In chapter 5:
[my mom was a Faunus and my dad was a human.]
[Naruto had gone ahead and told his team about his being a "Faunus"]
In chapter 6 he decides to put weird emphasis on the word faunus to leave hints that he’s lying, but that doesn’t change the fact that he’s lying:
["Yeah I was the only one. My mom was also a...'Faunus' but because of some issues during my birth I lost both her and my dad."]
And this is just the on-screen times, too. We don't know what he said in conversations off-screen.