Reviews for Remnant's Maelstrom Shinobi |
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ArashiNokitsune chapter 1 . 11/1 so Naruto is taking Jaune's place in the story more or less basically this will be different that's for sure |
Alasaverem heydrich chapter 39 . 6/11 Hajhahahahah I really like how Naruto evolves with his friendship with his new friends (although I hate jaune) |
Jov chapter 19 . 4/12 Glad you didnt forget my boy Jaune |
judgemental duck chapter 6 . 4/2 is that a deep space nine reference? |
benabbaswissame chapter 39 . 1/3 MothBallz please take your time to write sequel to remnant's shinobi maelstrom, Naruto create a seal that was combination of dead demon consuming seal and impure world resurrection, fan art of Naruto's combined of fox sage mode and four tailed cloak of chakra in golden version, Naruto fighting Geist and spider Grimm inside of his own mindscape, Naruto use creatures of Grimm to heal himself up |
benabbaswissame chapter 38 . 1/3 Ruby worldview was shattered by horrified reality the fall of beacon is similar to Konoha crush arc, Ruby and Weiss reminds Naruto of himself and Sasuke, Naruto helps Ren and Nora to kill the monster who have destroy their village |
benabbaswissame chapter 37 . 1/3 in reading team RWBY and JNPR get their fighting style fixed thanks to Naruto's shinobi training in RWBY canon summer rose has been caught by Salem and her gang, Naruto should Channelling lightning chakra into his chokuto blade to destroy twin blades of obsidian in cinder hands |
benabbaswissame chapter 36 . 1/3 in reading version team RWBY and JNPR listen to Naruto, Pyrrha, Ozpin, Glynda, Qrow and Ironwood conversation with shock reactions on their faces, Naruto should trained Pyrrha on how to use the power of fall maiden, the power of four maidens are transferred to new host through last thoughts of original users, Naruto create modified version of death reaper seal, I can imagine Naruto tells Kushina about Hinata as his girlfriend which means Arkos the name of Jaune arc and Pyrrha Nikos ship are still happen |
benabbaswissame chapter 35 . 1/3 Dylan Millwood hasn't updated his reading Remnant's Maelstrom Shinobi since Jul 7, 2022 because it now 2024 of the year, MothBallz please for love of god take your time to write next chapters of Remnant's Maelstrom Shinobi also I want to reading your next story of Naruto become professor of beacon academy at age 17, Weiss is truly combination of Sasuke and Sakura, Ruby is female version of 12 year old Naruto, in reading version I can imagine team RWBY and JNPR look at Naruto to see his eyebrow twitch in annoyance for being called a trophy wife, Riling up your opponents is psychological strategy, Naruto should trained team RWBY and team JNPR in shinobi psychological strategies, the urban jungle and a forest is Naruto's playground, in reading version I can imagine team RWBY and JNPR look at Naruto in shock for solve mystery of Aura, semblance, dust, creatures of Grimm, and the old wizard and four Maidens of Seasons, Naruto should teaching team RWBY and JNPR on how to use crystallized nature transformed chakra, in reading version I can imagine Naruto tells Pyrrha to use ice dust and lightning dust as combined attack against cinder in the battle of beacon chapter, in reading version Naruto tells Pyrrha to use her opponent height to her advantage, semblance of jester is shape shifting, team RWBY and JNPR reacts to Modified version of Uzumaki Naruto Barrage, the semblance of team RWBY and JNPR get evolved thanks to Naruto's training, the full potential of team RWBY and JNPR get trained by Naruto, in reading version I can imagine Naruto tells Ruby about cinder used her naivety to her advantage, Salem is Kaguya's new form |
benabbaswissame chapter 34 . 1/3 hey MothBallz after Remnant's Maelstrom Shinobi were finished could you please write fanfic of Naruto and Miraculous: the tale of ladybug and cat noir about post one armed Naruto taking 13 year old Marinette and 14 year old Adrien as his students to be trained heroes because I haven't see lot of Naruto and miraculous ladybug stories be creative written except the other box story by Flames of Azure, MothBallz please report emotional abuse about hater's tells writer named NeonZangetsu to kill himself for dislike his stories, in reading version I can imagine Weiss asking Naruto about summoning training, Winter and Weiss reminds Naruto of Itachi and Sasuke, in reading version Naruto tells team RWBY and JNPR about Qrow being related to Kakashi and Tsunade, Qrow's hair is black not grey, in reading version Naruto should tells team RWBY and team JNPR about fighting at speed of light being normalized with shinobi, Naruto should trained his sensing abilities without entered sage mode, it should be pure dark red crescent, Yang and TaiYang are Naruto's descendants, Qrow reminds Naruto of Kakashi, Jiraiya and Tsunade, in reading version team RWBY and team JNPR are listen to Qrow, Glynda, Ozpin and James ironwood conversation with shock reactions, I can imagine Summer tells Ruby to never pick up Qrow drink habit, what does Kurama talking about with Naruto, I can imagine Naruto say Pyrrha and I are too obvious choice for my liking than Naruto send Pyrrha and Nora as surprise choice against team JEST, I'm not fan of OC's in fanfiction due to being poorly written by writers |
benabbaswissame chapter 33 . 1/3 reading chapters of your own story to fix it, write creative Omakes, Nora is fusion of Thor and Hulk, orange maelstrom is better nickname for Naruto, team TEJS are original characters that was created by Agurra of the Darkness |
benabbaswissame chapter 32 . 1/3 why not write your own version of reading Remnant's Shinobi Maelstrom instead of waiting for someone to do it, team RWBY and team JNPR is lacking war experience, Weiss get along with Naruto just fine due to being descendant of Sasuke Uchiha |
benabbaswissame chapter 29 . 1/2 Blake and Pyrrha agree to sharing Naruto as their shared boyfriend |
benabbaswissame chapter 28 . 1/2 each volume outfits are unique, I can imagine summer lecturing yang about drinking alcohol underage and Qrow were bad role model |
benabbaswissame chapter 26 . 1/2 Naruto should burning scroll of seals after learning everything in it, Naruto thinks of team RWBY and team JNPR as his spiritual family |