Reviews for Remnant's Maelstrom Shinobi
YeagerMeister31 chapter 6 . 9/13/2021
Well, that was another good chapter I'll start with the pairing I hope it's Pyrrha if it's a solo pairing, if Harem still Pyrrha, Yang, Blake and sure why not Cinder.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 5 . 9/12/2021
Well, I must say I'm kinda conflicted on this chapter, what Naruto said about the Teachers is probably true but there still Hypocrites, regardless, Naruto calling himself a Faunus is the most stupidest thing he could do, He's lying to them, just tell them the fucking truth, they accepted him for being a Faunus, won't they be angry when he does tell them the truth in fact he was doubly lying to them by saying he's a faunus, but the whole being from another world is out there still, will he tell them the truth, as for Glynda beating Naruto I doubt it this is set after the war right Glynda would get her ass handed to her plain and simple, but then again maybe not does he have Chakra I can't remember if this was the story where he lost it, if he didn't lose it she wouldn't stand a chance, he has the powers of a god I doubt he would even need to go into Kurama mode to beat her and certainly not Rokudo Sannin mode, but oh well. Maybe I'm wrong about her, she's still a Hypocrite.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 4 . 9/11/2021
Well, that was quite amusing, Kurama's plan backfired though, I can't wait for more.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 3 . 9/10/2021
That was another nice chapter I don't know why I stopped reading this after chapter 2 oh well.
Arashi Uzukaze chapter 17 . 8/8/2021
This Naruto while still powerful seems to only be at the level of Pain Arc Naruto. Vastly weaker than canon Naruto (who would've had his OP powerups before being sent here) from when he came from but still powerful in his own right.
Arashi Uzukaze chapter 15 . 8/8/2021
Interesting. So in this Narutoverse, Naruto never trained with Killer Bee to gain control and master Kurama's chakra (otherwise her wouldn't be afraid to use it). Not only that but he retains the Jinchuuriki cloak instead of the Kurama chakra cloak.

Not only that but this Minato sealed the Yin half instead of the Yang half into Naruto. So much stuff has been changed from canon, interesting.
Arashi Uzukaze chapter 12 . 8/8/2021
He forgot to mention that eventually people started to see him for who he was, to the point that everyone willingly defended him from the Akatsuki invasion 2 years later.
Arashi Uzukaze chapter 8 . 8/8/2021
If this is the far future, then unless the God Brothers destroyed every Major village along with the elemental nations (given what the continents of Remnant look like), there should be at least ruins.
Mikhail-Zex chapter 9 . 8/4/2021
good evening. am currently readinging "remenents malestrom shinobi". at about chapter 10. really like your work so far.

I did notice that part 2 is kinda hanging, so whith your permission, I'd like to continue writing your fic as soon as I finish reading the first part.

am more than ready to stick to your "characters mind" writing style and your story outline (if you have one).

please do let me know what you think.
Qwd chapter 9 . 7/19/2021
Oh it just happens she found scrolls about tailed beasts. Now next thing she would find would be scrolls about Naruto. As Stanislawski said " I don't believe". Why not she find some sharingans in a bottle. Then it won't be RWBY.
Sage Games chapter 39 . 5/19/2021
Also, for suggestions in regards to RMS B2, maybe Naruto might catch quick glimpses of Summer's ghost since Ruby asked her to watch over him. Maybe Tai also sees Pyrrha's struggles and has a bit of a talk with her (maybe Nora and Ren as well) about loss. Hell, maybe the group (specifically Pyrrha) gets some glimpses of the ghosts of Naruto's friends, his parents, shit like that. Maybe Yang is actually with Ruby and co. on their way to Haven. Maybe they run into Raven. Maybe she reveals that she saw what happened at Beacon, including Naruto's "death" and comments about the foolishness of it, which grinds the group's gears (especially Pyrrha's). Of course, I want Weiss to find out about Naruto's "death" as well. Maybe Yang expresses some guilt like, "If I hadn't been stupid, I wouldn't have lost my arm. Then I could've gone with Ruby and Weiss and we could've gotten there guicker. Maybe we all could've stopped Cinder and Naruto would still be here!" Something like that. Just some suggestions
creeperslayer239 chapter 3 . 5/14/2021
shoulda called the team nurp
Baahubali chapter 39 . 5/6/2021
Luv this so much! Everything is just perfect and I rlly excited to c what happens!
silentcaster chapter 22 . 4/30/2021
how dare u say guy is a normal Shinobi . in any way shape or form.
Crimson Riot 01 chapter 39 . 4/27/2021
Esto es fantástico, sigue publicando más capítulos de este fic
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