Blake would be better suited for Naruto as girlfriend, team combo name for Naruto and Ruby

let Naruto and Blake as pairing happen naturally without it feel forced, no just no Naruto and Yang pairing is getting old, Ren is mixture of Shikamaru and Neji, Naruto and Neo acting like related siblings playing pranks

team RWBY and team JNPR does reminds Naruto of team 7 and team 8, team combo name for Naruto and Blake, I love it when you let team RWBY and team JNPR have spotlight instead of focus on Naruto all the time, fan art of Naruto and Blake standing back to back as partners, Blake's semblance has been evolved thanks to Naruto's training

Naruto should tells Blake about getting hurt is part of being huntsmen and huntress, Naruto calling Weiss's pout as adorable, Weiss is mixture of Sakura and Sasuke, Naruto should teaching team RWBY and NPR how to recognize illusions by Genjutsu user, Ruby and Neo look like adorable little girls locked in a heated stare down, dangerous artifacts shouldn't be in the museum, Grimm version of Tora the demon cat, it seems like Tora the demon cat is fellow Naruto everywhere he goes include the far future

Konobijutsu: Fusui Rappa no Jutsu aka collaboration technique: wind water wild wave technique is Naruto new self created technique, realistically teamwork of team NNPR allow Naruto to create Senpō Katon Rasenshuriken (sage art fire release Spiralling shuriken), Naruto's weapon is staff/sword/Sniper hybrid, Ren is related to Shikamaru, Yang is combination of Tsunade, Sakura and Ino

Haku is actually a boy, team RWBY and JNPR look at Naruto with pity, Naruto should use Rasengan as makeshift Torch,

Naruto should writing aura control books that was based off chakra control exercises, Naruto should sparring with team RWBY, team RWBY and JNPR look at Naruto for explanation of island of uzushiogakure in reaction room, Naruto should destroying dangerous artifacts to prevent them from fall into wrong hands, Naruto is technically adult, Naruto should let team RWBY to company him and his team on mission, weapons of professor peach look similar to wonder woman, olive and Oobleck combine earth dust and fire dust into lava, team RWBY and JNPR reactions to team NNPR fighting stone guardian, team RWBY and JNPR take notes from watching their other selves sparring with Naruto

Naruto tells team RWBY and JNPR about how Iruka sensei would be disappointed with professor port tells stories of his youth instead of actual teaching class about Grimm strength and weakness, professor port is more of Grandfather than teacher, Neo is master of the art of acting, adorable girls is Naruto's weakness, Naruto and Neo develops a bond that was akin to siblings, Naruto giving Neo BackRide like Itachi does with Sasuke, dude you should have use official physical appearance of professor peach from google in your chapter 13, overactive imagination is Neo's semblance, I can imagine Minato, Kakashi be disappointed with professor port style of teaching while Summer Rose will be outrage at professor port for flirting with her underage step-daughter aka Yang

Naruto and Ruby develops a bond that was akin to siblings, please do full recap of previous chapters for reading version, team RWBY and JNPR listen to Naruto and Cinder conversation, team RWBY and JNPR look at Naruto in shock for evaded the cold grasp of the Shinigami aka god of death, fan art of Naruto wrapped his arms tightly around Blake's body, fan art of Blake sat on Naruto's lap with his arms wrapped around her and placed his head on top of her own head, maybe Pyrrha and Blake would agree on sharing Naruto as their boyfriend, Pyrrha develops yandere mode, Naruto use 1000 years of death technique on Jiraiya

Mothballz the reading version of Remnant s Maelstrom Shinobi has not been updated in 2023-2024, Kurama keep Naruto from having self pity party like Kakashi always does by stare at Obito grave stone, Kakashi explains Akatsuki rings to team RWBY and JNPR as reason for Naruto to be angry, Juubi cult, Naruto should recreate Suppression seal tags for Nora, Ren, Pyrrha to use it on him after go on rampage, I can imagine Summer Rose lecturing Yang about her behavior, Minato tells team RWBY and JNPR about a ten tailed god were called the Juubi, Naruto and Ruby could passed as siblings, Emerald looked like combination of Fū and killer bee, I can imagine Kakashi tells team RWBY and JNPR to knock Naruto out to sleep if he was being stubborn about it, Naruto tells team RWBY and JNPR about his fist-shaped scar, Naruto and Ruby develops sibling-like bond, Kakashi tells team RWBY and JNPR about Naruto develops fear of woman all thanks to Sakura, Ruby acting like mixture of Naruto and TenTen, Naruto is professor of PickPocket

Naruto and Weiss has unexpectedly Friendship, Naruto and Weiss are related, thunder rose is better combo name for Nora and Ren, Naruto find one of Akatsuki rings, I can imagine Salem created Grimm replica of Kurama, please make Naruto and Blake as romantic pairing also can you please explain where is Jaune arc, character progression should happen naturally

let relationships between characters happen naturally, please take criticism as motivation to refine your skills as writer

Naruto should develops sibling-like relationship with Neo, Harem stories has bad reputation, Naruto Uzumaki and Blake Belladonna as refreshing pairing because Naruto x Yang as pairing is getting old, please don't let anyone rush you with their impatience to upload next chapters of Remnant's shinobi maelstrom, Naruto should tells team RWBY about learning hand-to-hand skills to defend themselves in case of their weapon get take away by enemy, it's called studying fighting style of opponent, Naruto summoning shadow clone without the need for cross seal, team RWBY, JNPR and Naruto want to see how does the fight between Naruto and Pyrrha have end, Naruto and Pyrrha are Technically grandfather and granddaughter, Pyrrha are mixture of Naruto's attitude and Sasuke's prodigy reputation, Naruto carrying his weapon within storage scroll while wearing civilian clothes, Naruto and Pyrrha develops sibling-like relationship Naturally, Naruto should use fire release to burning shinobi scrolls as way prevent others from getting their hands on them, Naruto can switch between normal teenage boy and shinobi

my friend please put disclaimer on your stories to avoid copyright issue, shinobi and kunoichi are predecessors of huntsman and huntress, Naruto should tells Blake about white fang being similar to Akatsuki, Weiss and Yang should fight against cinder, Nora and Ren should fight against roman TorchWick, Pyrrha and Ruby should fight against Neo as opponent switch tactic, Naruto and Blake begin to form romantic feelings through Natural development

How does it feel to choke on your words that Cinder isn't some cliched villain?