Nice landing

I vote for Naruto/Pyrrha or harem since strangely enough Pyrrha doesn't often get paired with Naruto in the crossovers. That maybe because people pair her with Jaune though.

Interesting story. For Naruto's weapon, I can only of either a sword similar to the Dragonblade used in Dragon Chronicles or a tonfa since it is not only a weapon that is barely used in media but also used in general despite having wicked attack power. Good luck and keep up the good work. (I vote for either harem or Pyrhha!)

Liking the story so far even its just the beginning. I wonder what Team JNPR's names gonna be now with Jaune's gone. Can wait to see what you have in store.
Now the review, to me there isn't anything wrong with the writing at the moment and seems you have a solid start. Pairing wise I'll say go for Prryha or Harem. Pryyha cause you don't see that much pairing of her with anyone and the other one cause I know with his type of personality, theres bound to be more girls. As for the weapon, try to find something that could go well with his ninja skill something small but not to small and flow with his movement.
All in all, your doing good bud, hope you'll continue it :D

Nice job... I really like how you portray Naruto after he came to remnant and how he cope with it by making jokes and trying to move on :D the confidence in his skills is a plus as well great work

Great story so far just a suggestion for his weapon you could try and have him use a shakujo

Pretty interesting start. I am interested in how Naruto ended up in Remnant. Though admittedly I'm kinda annoyed by how Naruto seems to be drawn by red hair lile Minato was. And Naruto did come off as kinda douchy for beating a guy up when he was keeping him up.

Kinda funny since despite my earlier words I say my main choice in pairing is Phyrra. I am a fan of her character and feel she'd be a good match for Naruto, and this isn't based on her hair color. Abother choice is Yang. The two would just naturally click. To be honest I hope you don't do a harem, but it's your story.

As for a weapon I'm drawing blanks. Can only think of the Blazfire Saber.

Anyway I'll be looking forward to the rest.

This is awesome can't wait to read more...and on the subject of Narutos weapon I like to offer two ideas Number 1 A chainsword you know like the ones from warhammer 40k I dunno why but I can just picture your Naruto with one.

Number 2: If Naruto knows the hiraishin a Kunai Launcher like the ones used in the 2nd Shippuden movie Bonds that shoots Hiraishin Kunai, which also transforms into a spear.

Well my ideas might seem outlandish but here they are, good luck on your next chapter.