Reviews for Remnant's Maelstrom Shinobi
Diametrik chapter 12 . 1/1/2023
I really don't get your characterisation of Naruto in regards to cooperating with Cinder. Even if she has some kind of noble goal, Naruto's whole thing is defeating and then redeeming tragic/well-meaning villains. He definitely would not go along with Cinder's plan, nor would he just sit back and let it happen.
Diametrik chapter 11 . 1/1/2023
["I never outright lied to you. I never told the full truth, but I never said I was a Faunus, you all just assumed that, because of how I look when I use Kurama's chakra."]

Naruto’s straight-up gaslighting them here. Yes, sometimes he was tricky with his wording so that he wasn't outright lying, merely lying by omission, but several times he did just lie without being tricky.

Never mind the other various lies, here are just the times he’s said he is a faunus:
In chapter 5:
[my mom was a Faunus and my dad was a human.]
[Naruto had gone ahead and told his team about his being a "Faunus"]

In chapter 6 he decides to put weird emphasis on the word faunus to leave hints that he’s lying, but that doesn’t change the fact that he’s lying:
["Yeah I was the only one. My mom was also a...'Faunus' but because of some issues during my birth I lost both her and my dad."]

And this is just the on-screen times, too. We don't know what he said in conversations off-screen.
Diametrik chapter 10 . 1/1/2023
I'm confused. They have a solid lead on the source of what's attracting the grimm, and yet they just sit around going "I don't know what's going on!"
Diametrik chapter 5 . 1/1/2023
So Blake lied about her interpretation of Naruto's expression and prevented him from having the support of his friends, all so she could interrogate him while he was feeling emotional? The exact thing she said as an excuse to prevent others from looking for him? That's pretty callous and unkind.

And I guess you retconned Weiss being a racist because it's not very palatable?
Diametrik chapter 3 . 1/1/2023
"it's probably gonna be a single pairing. With who? I don't know yet."

Considering he practically had a love-at-first-sight thing with Pyrrha and that interaction has only continued to grow, it would be very strange if that pairing is dismissed.
Diametrik chapter 2 . 1/1/2023
PRUN (Prune) with U for Uzumaki (easily justifiable, considering he introduces himself as Uzumaki Naruto, not Naruto Uzumaki) would've been so much better. NNPR with two N's standing for the same N in Napier feels awkward
Diametrik chapter 1 . 1/1/2023
I can't tell if you're poking fun at how many of RWBY's ideas are copied from other anime or if you're actually like "wow, what a coincidence!"
DragonEyesBlue chapter 1 . 12/10/2022
10/10
Panjason chapter 5 . 11/30/2022
I’ll be honest… the whole but before beating the shit out of Cardin seemed overblown and unnecessary. It implies the act will is actually worth much at all.
Barely anything at all will change.
Oh well, still fun.
Dasgun chapter 1 . 11/18/2022
o0
norm2434 chapter 39 . 10/27/2022
ok this is just plain bullshit why tf is Naruto so weak here wtf
JensenDaniels32 chapter 4 . 8/29/2022
Keeping secrets is out of character for Naruto.
JensenDaniels32 chapter 2 . 8/29/2022
...Oh, right. Not wanting to reveal himself. I admit that I had forgotten about that. My bad.
JensenDaniels32 chapter 2 . 8/29/2022
Are you telling me that Naruto couldn't have handled ONE overly large Deathstalker?! He could handle SALEM by just sealing her into a scroll!
BFTyrant chapter 2 . 8/25/2022
Many apologies disregard my previous comment evidently I was not paying attention and really tired… keep up the good work and have a wonderful day!
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